Second time through. Even better than the first. One of the BEST AU KP stories, period. Great character development, great OCs, and a story line that holds you all the way through. Finest kind. And I don't say that very often.

Great story

The story is great and so is the handling of the characters , but the real star is the worldbuilding, A USA as one of the few liberal democratic oasis in a world , that maybe isnt as brutal as it seems, Quite intriguing . Also these AU characters 5% diverged from the original ones are fantastic, especially the Spartacist Bonnie is worth noting, not many lines used on this poor girl , but she still appear more alive than in many stories where she a plays a bigger role.

Whole story worth a read, and a reread

Heh Evil Dead duo reference

Just finished reading this for the first time in years. It really is good, hope you think about writing your own original stuff one day.

personally i lloved the feel of this fic
very well done wish there was more but this is a good ending
i read this all in 2 days did not sleep much last night
felt really relistic and smooth thanks for the fun ride
a new big fan
Scorpioneldar

I'm beginning to wonder how anyone can mistake this verse's Kim for the regular one. The one that is kidnapped right now seems both easily manipulated and manipulative herself. She sounds like a less openly malicious Bonnie, just without the confidence that regular Bonnie actually has.

Oh, this is so awesome. The narration is full of character and the constant barrage of "wait, that was who? And they're what in this world?" is brilliant.

Man, took me a couple of repeat readings to get what you meant with Wade and porn. Thank heavens. At first I thought he'd been starring, not just running the business. Guuuh.

One of my favorite stories. You capture the hard-boiled feel as well as Hammett or Chandler. I love the back story you give Shego here and think you nailed all of the KP characters. I have re-read this story at least six times in the last six months.

Great story! I hope that will do some more with or without either set of Kiron. Not that I would turn some KiRon but I do love your Sasha.

Pretty good story, but the dialogue borders on incomprehensible sometimes, as it's often difficult to tell who's who. :/

What a gripping adventure. The narration from Sasha/Shego's POV was ingenious. And K/R becomes even fluffier from her observation. The alternative universe travel is done really well and fitting of the whole noir/semi-realistic atmosphere. This is probably the best AU story I've ever read on the website. Too bad it takes me 4 years to discover this gem of a story (Not so much, considering that I've only re-discovered KP 2 months ago)

Excellent story,

Greatly written, and completely Sasha's POV.

I enjoyed how Sasha's world was different and somehow the same. The ending was action packed and very suspenseful down to the end. The epilogue was touching and made for a great end. Now let's hope Sasha get's a new arm.

Keep up the very good writing that you do,

reader101w

Still going great,

Interesting that Ron's powers still work.

One little question though, are Kimberly and Ronald from slightly later in their own universe, since they already finished high school? And are they thus older than Kim and Ron from the story universe?

keep up the very good writing that you do,

reader101w

Great story so far.

I really like the way Sasha tells the story, as if she is explaining the whole story to the reader like the reader is having a drink with her.

More former villains are shown, some even seeming more dangerous than in Kimberly's universe.

Just how estranged is the history of this world from Kimberly's original? It seems that a lot it subtly but significantly different.

I hope to rest the rest soon.

keep up the very good writing that you do,

reader101w