That had nice detail and feelings. I liked it!

I guess it is a bit late to review this story since it was published last year four months from now. I stumbled upon your story actually looking for one written by Nieriel Raina, and I did not know there were even any fanfiction stories about Tales of Symphonia, and haveing played the game (though, regretfully, never beating it. My cousin took it. Wahh!) I thought I would read it. It was very interesting, I thought, very cute. You know Sheena loved them all, even if she was too hard to show it. The ending was cute, too, how lovely! There were just a few grammatical mistakes, like: "Not that this isn't fun," she kissed her again.." Zelos is a guy :). Though no doubt you knew that :D. I hope I stumble upon more of your stories in the future!

Best of luck in your literary endeavors!

Meriagrin Baggwise

I liked this a lot, I really did. I think it's the best Sheelos I've read, mostly because Sheena is so well-done. A lot of people portray her as a person that smack a lot, she really isn't... yes, she smacks Zelos, but not CONSTANTLY.

And Zelos was good, too.

Overall, nice job.

FLUFFY! but nice!

heh heh, i like it, it matched Zelos!

Aww, this was sweet! Wow, I've left a lot of reviews along those lines today. Hehe. But yeah, it was sweet. And you seem to be a bit comma-happy. Well, that's my term for it; you just use commas a bit too much, usually in places where you don't need them. But it was good! Keep it up!

~Red

Go Zelos x Sheena! That's the way to do it zelos!

Open your heart Sheena!

Wonderful story!

"Sigh" Another one of these, after Zelos betrays the group, but not that it's bad, it's awesome! Fluffy, and funneh! Especially the ending, liked it when you said she was glad for her affinity for holes, so true. Tis a good fic, too bad it's a ONESHOT, I hate ONESHOT Sheelos fics like these. I wanna see what happens after.

Plz, make more, I want to see Sheelos fics where after they kiss and admit their feelings, wat happens more. But wtvr, it's your choice, and if you do, or make another Sheelos fic that's remotely like this one, but isn't a ONESHOT, pm me, thanks!

~*YZT

There were a few typos that ticked me, but overall, SWEET! Shelos! Yay! It was great!

Wow, I really liked this, very well written, it's a very good read of what Sheena would think about when falling into the hole, where she thinks she'll die, keep up the good work! D