I love this story to bits. 3

Especially Vin's POV. I mean, people always make him like a depressed emo or something. I like this version of POV more.

Please update! It's just getting good!

Please update as soon as possible, this story is good_...

This was one of those stories that I couldn't peel my eyes off of. You portray these characters perfectly; each one acts like they're supposed to and it just makes me grin and drool and such. You should definetly continue it!

Courtesy says ‘well oops’ friendship says ‘I’m sorry’ ;)

it was great update asap

(eats fish dinner with you) That was much better. The story I mean, not the food. And YES, damnit, slash should have its awkward moments - because lets face it, two guys realising they like each other (especially without admitting that they're attracted to men) is never going to be sunshine and daisies.

Gah, I hate it when the suddenly-gay thing happens...with the world as homophobic as it is (although I'd like to think it's getting slowly more accepting) then at least ONE person is bound to be against it. Although I notice that it may be Tifa in this instance...please tred carefully, so many people bash her character and make her into a complete bitch. Maybe it's just me, but she always came across as a nice person who would probably accept someone no matter they were like (geez, just look at Cloud...anyone else would've been running for the hills by then). It's also possible to seem homophobic without being outright obnoxious about it - the person could just be kinda put off, and look away whenever the two in question start kissing or whatever.

So moral of the rant is: homophobia is a likely occurence, but be careful not to bash anyone who probably wouldn't hve too much of a problem with it.

I do dislike the trend of 'you're gay, I'll be gay too!' though. It makes more sense to have some couples straight, others gay (even if I don't particularly like readng about straight couples, but I don't like it when EVERYONE'S gay either).

So yeah, comments on the chapter...good, good and more good! I reckon your chapters are never going to be stunningly long, so I'll shut up about that now...but again, keep up the standard or I'll throw more random objects at you.

ReaperRain

! Yay ya updated! I'm so happy, now I can go to work with a happy face on .. But dayum, can't wait for the next chapter, THIS WAS SO GODD. *_* Yumyum ..

Yeah I read it, but I just haven't said anything. XD; *likes to lurk* But I thought I should, so I did!

This is awsome! PLease update ASAP!

OMG. Awwe~ Seems like a cool story, I thinK I read part of it before... But I'm not quite sure. I do like it, a lot actually. Wow, I'm rambling. (this is what comes from staying up all night watching Eraser, Advent Children, and a completely random anime movie I'm fairly sure was called Escaflowne. Always made me think of elderflower. Wow. Now I'm ranting again.) Right. Anyways, this last chapter is cute and funny and kind of angsty for half a second. Right, I like it, now I'll stop rambling.

-Wd

"You want me to, guess." This was more of a statement on how stupid I thought the idea was, than a question towards it. His teeth chomped on the corner of his bottom lip uncomfortably,

"Better than leaving me hanging." I sighed. I disliked rushed decisions, they never seemed to turn out right. So I decided to attempt avoiding it.

"Do you?" His face grew blank and he frowned,

"Do I. what?"

You're doing that thing again where it's the speaker's lines and the other person's actions mixed together. Please try not to, it makes the story considerably harder to follow. Here:

"You want me to, guess." This was more of a statement on how stupid I thought the idea was, than a question towards it.

His teeth chomped on the corner of his bottom lip uncomfortably, "Better than leaving me hanging."

I sighed. I disliked rushed decisions, they never seemed to turn out right. So I decided to attempt avoiding it.

"Do you?"

His face grew blank and he frowned, "Do I. what?"

That's how it should be (unless I've got mixed up about who says what line...which only further proves my point). You do it at the end as well, try to fix that. Oh and one more thing:

"'Like'," Vincent practically winced at the stupid word, "Me." Now it was Cid's turn to blush girlishly and stutter. But, he didn't. He didn't even hesitate.

You changed from first to third person tense. Now come on, what did I say about standards slipping? Pay attention to your work!

For the record though, I loved the interaction (see, it's not all criticism, just...mostly) between them. You write wonderfully awkward fluff, a change from the usual romance where nothing goes wrong despite this being the first man-on-man experience for the both of them...(shakes fist) it should be AWKWARD, damnit. But yeah, nicely done.

And one more thing...LONGER! (throws fish at you) I understand the meaning of a good cliffhanger, but I want more interaction, damnit! Squish a few chapters together if you have to!

ReaperRain

Eya, I'm so glad you updated! *checks this almost every day if it's updated*

Hee, I love awkward moments like these, they make me giggle. ~ So cute. ;3; I can't wait to see where this is going..! Keep it up. ;]

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FINALLY THE KISS! SWEET VICTORY THE SAUSAGE HATH CLEANSED THEIR MINDS! X3

Awkward conversation, lolz :P Meh bets that sausage would have lightened moodlehness.

Meh happy to have overloadedness you with luffles of ultimate lufflesness! WOO! Victory twirliness! At least meh make laughles for luffles. :3

Whee! Plot finally made way for kissness (I know I said that, but I victoriness!) of DOOMLINESS!

I offer you more luffles of luffleness of lufflopolis!

LUFF!

'she snatched up a sausage off the tray, now full, on my desk and threw it at him. It bounced off his face and landed on the dusty floor. This saddened me somewhat.'

...Is it weird that I find that funny?

Ahem, very nicely done. I loved the defeated sigh from Cid at the start, it seemed so...I dunno, right. And Cid's spluttering rage at the mention of kinky things fit so perfectly as well (not just for him but for Yuffie - that's exactly the sort of thing she'd say). I also quite liked Vincent matter-of-fact observations (such as the face-stretching) since he's emotionally detached like that, and it suited him - although make sure you don't go overboard with that now that I've mentioned it.

Other than the length, brilliant. You're doing really good, keep it up!

ReaperRain

SAUSAGES! X3 XD X3 {X

It bounceded off of Ciddy-poos head and made Vinne-coos sad...

IT TEH HIGHLIGHT OF MEH LIFE! VICTORY!

Meef, I see plot got in way again of good kissaliciousness. I will wait then... WITH SAUSAGE DELIGHT! ..

Meh ish overly luffed, and meh luffing luffingness because luffing by luffer-giver deserves luffles and luffles by luffler-giver-recievy. YAY FOR LUFFLES!

And meh happy to give you good delight of... eh... funnynessishmness?

Eh, whateverz. Don't god to fastilischiousfast with writer block, it make brain hurt and die... BUT SAUSAGE CLEANSES.

MORE LUFFLES TO GREATNESS! -luffles on you-

:3

O...M...G! I love it so far! please update soon!