Having a baby is also not easy but at least Pansy avoids being brutalized by Malfoy. Speaking of Malfoy, I come to wonder if this guy is not sterile since he tried to conceive a baby with Pansy for years after sabotaging the girl's contraception but she never stayed pregnant with him.

Poor Pansy: it's horrible what the Death Eaters want to do to him, not to mention the fact that it is used as an object. I wonder if Parkinson's senior Pansy's father is aware of this and if he approves. I hope that Gregory and she will find a solution to escape and if possible take Gregory's mother with them.

wow i really found this chapter very well written and above all really very touching. I really loved the behavior of Gregory who defended Pansy against Malfoy and also helped the girl to regain self-confidence. Frankly, you have given another image of Goyle who always appears as a thick brute in other fictions or even the novel. It's really beautiful !
I also like the change in attitude from Pansy who not only defends Gregory but also realizes that he is a person with a big heart and not a brute that he should be ashamed of because of his physique.

Hello this is an interesting begginnings ! I really like Gregory's behavior in this chapter ! He's smarter than people think about him

Ohhh... Soo sad

really good so far and it's nice to read something fresh like this. I haven't found any stories with much to do with Pansy Parkinson before.

I really like it. You are so creative.

I really like this so far.

I just discovered this story and read it in one night. It was well written and a nice plot line, as well as a pairing that I hadn't thought of before. It made me laugh so much, and get emotional too. I absolutely loved it. My favorite Goyle moment was in the bathroom though, when he starts cursing the mirror for making Pansy feel bad. It was genius and one of the sweetest things I've read. If only real guys were like that. Well I'm going to read more of your work, just thought I'd show some appreciation.

A wonderful story!I really love the way you portrayed the other side of pansy and gregory! Had always thought that there had to be more than what we read about them...Beautifully written!

Hey.

Whilst I do enjoy reading your story, I still think Pansy is largely out of character, in terms of the way her speech is written. The speech she gave to Prof McG, regarding Goyle, whilst being very sweet, it felt too formal and eloquent to belong to a teenager, especially from the minimal contact we've had of Pansy in the books.

Goyle's...well, his speech and behaviour is understandable, as you've explained it as him acting all these years.

You got Prof McG down to a T though! Her speech is very McGonagall, and brilliantly in character! And the little comment about Snape being more annoyed about them coming in 45 minutes late rather than having them miss it was funny and very characterustic of Snape.

Draco's response to Goyle's violence was very in-character too!

Basically, the only thing that felt a bit jarring was Pansy's speech and some of the ways she talks. I also think you shouldn't make the changes between Pansy's point of view and Goyle's so abruptly. It feels too sudden and jarring, in terms of reading it. Aside from that, it's a brilliant story so far and I can't wait to read the rest!

~ SD ~

four score is eighty. did you mean that? that't a LOT.

Oh damn you! I have only read the first chapter and already seeing Goyle (and Crabbe?) in a weird new light.. Like I actually want to know more about them. This has never happened before ;) Anyways, I think I'm going to read the story even if the pairing isn't the usual.

Great

Dude, I went searching for Draco/Ginny fics ... How the hell did I end up here? Oh well, I'm glad I did. This is a really good fic! Probably the only char I hate more than Goyle is Parkinson, and yet here I am reading a lovey dovey fic about the two! And enjoying it! It's kinda 2 am right now so I'll come back to this later. :D Good job! I can't wait to read more!