*applause*

A much better ending, and you've nailed the characters' voices too. Great stuff! :-)

Oh, wow. I know it says on your profile not to demand continuances of oneshots, but are you SURE you don't want to keep going? I mean, there's a whole stretch of adventure here, just waiting! :) Maybe that's what you wanted-to leave it up to imagination. I agree, the ending of the movie was crummy. You've done a good job, here. Thanks for making me feel better. :)

Great job! Everyone's exactly in character :)

Got their voices down perfectly! Thank you for sharing!

Loved it. You've got everyone so perfectly in character (I could just see Elizabeth's reactions to what Jack was saying XD).

Peace out

~TSD

I love these types of one-shots. You did a great job. Jack and Elizabeth? Well, not entirely unexpected, since both can be unabashed flirts. I have a feeling Elizabeth loves Will more.

Fountain of Youth for Elizabeth as well as Jack? That would help, wouldn't it?

I really liked it. A more prefferable end to AWE, which I wager will have a sequel - 4th movie. Too much was left untold.

Speaking of sequel's, is there any chance you'd write one for this fic?

Short, sweet and to the point! Nice job!

This was... heartstring-tugging. And a little confusing.

"Course, I didn't tell him about you and me..." Are Jack and Elizabeth together? I don't think so, but I'm not sure.

wow, intriguing! the concept definately has merit and i loved how you stuck to the characters - especially jack sparrow ;)