YES PLEASE I FUCCING LOVE THIS STORY ALREADY!

Wow! Well that was a weiiiiird story! It was pretty funny and I liked the end.. it was bothering me that L and Light weren't completely honest and didn't know each other that much.. but yay that was fun to read! Thank you very much! :)))

This poor soul has been subjected to this fanfic through and through. I read the entire thing and I can’t help but ask... is it deliberate? The cliche? The haphazard and glossed over biology of L somehow becoming pregnant? The OCCness that is somehow WORSE than most other fanfics I’ve read? The copious and casual misogyny? It’s horrific. Part of me feels as though it’s a social experiment to see who can pick it out. But whatever I guess, it’s your fanfic at the end of the day. M preg stories are fine, but if you are going to delve into the biology of it at least make it make sense or at least do some A/B/O shit. (Or y’know just genderbend L... oh wait) if you want to put sexism, OCCness and cliche into it it’s fine.

whoa unless kira rose again? Are you implying something author-chan

beautiful love it

I love your story

I love how Light and L work together on a lot of this, but I don't think the objections of the two older men would just vanish. Why haven't we heard a peep from them in a long time?

Damnnnnnnnnnnn this was so good! I wish I could write like this XD

I couldn't stop laughing. Now my face hurts.

Good story.

Their would be a lot more drama if L was a girl, you could've given Watari an 'Overprotective "No one's good enough for my little girl" father' stereotype.

Um, well I'm not even going to start on how I'm seeing this.

That was a cute and great story.

Awww cute

I'M TOTALLY WRITING SOICHIRO YAGAMI AND QUILLISH WAMMY IN MY DEATH NOTE. GOD THEY ARE SO DAMN IRRITATING UGH!