This was beautiful. A wonderful job and a "not gross" view of his love for her. Beautiful.

Very cute

aww that was sweet i need to read more of the fanfictions and thanks i first read the one with the spanish spelling the talk ad word the faun said was so romanitc(and dark because of his longing for her at that age but i like that)

LOVED!

Okay. Disregard my earlier review from the Spanish Dialogue version of this. (somewhat embarassed smile) But I was correct though. It is much better when I understand what they are saying. It was very beautiful! :D I really loved it!

Person Of A Strange Origin

absolutely amazing! you still kept the story going with all its mysteries & unanswered questions intact instead of just writing a story where only the writer lead the gave us (readers) a chance to read between the line and to lead our own way through your story following your lead. Even though I was hoping a more tragic and strange reason for the princess' mark on her shoulder but still I like your story.

This is a great behind the scenes story. Please write others too. Your work is awesome. By the way I'm taking Spanish too but probably not at your level.

aw! that is so sweet! i love it! please make moar! D

Man, this is good. I'm with everyone else who is downright BEGGING you to continue this in some way. I'm hooked!

is it over? Is it done? No! Don't be done please! I'm begging you, it's too good!

oh... I just noticed you did an english version...

Yeah.. I loved this one too!

very nice. I likes it.

Now I would like to see a tale of the princess come of age being courted by the faun.

:D

This story was wonderfully put together. I saw it as if it continted from Pans Labyrinth itself! Please, please update soon!

Absolutely magical!

Aww! THat was so beautiful! I applaud you. :D I hope you will make another story like this soon!