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I absolutely LOVED THIS! XD You are now my favoritest person EVAR! *massive bear hug*

Aw. I'm sad now. I was hoping for Prince and Nay to get together. Oh well. Moving onward

Ew. Vomit. I understand people usually do that after waking up when knocked unconcious, but I can't stand the thought, sight, or sound, of it. It makes me feel sick x.x

Good chapter otherwise

Lol, I hope ms fox and prince get together, actually. However, I'm not going to demand it, as it isn't my story, and it looks like you've already writen quite a good bit of it that I hevent read just yet. Anywho, I figured I should leave you a review after that last A/N. Enjoy! XD well, I'm gonna go back to obsessivly reading. I'll probably review now and then, just for you lol

Oh boy, she's gonna be a handful.

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What? I didn't have much worth while to say. Funny chapter though :)

i wait in anticipation for the sequel.

I'm STILL laughing! That battle was AWESOME. Or, well, the manner of it: talking about fast food, making fun of the Vizier . . . and Farah hovering off in a corner and not getting enough attention, as usual. *sigh* I'm not entirely blaming you for that: it was that way in the game, too.

And I will ignore Naomi's "friendly" kiss, for now. Well, except for this: *gives Ultimate Death Glare of Doom*

Favorite line of chapter:

"What's junk food?"

"Food that's bad for you and that you shouldn't eat!"

"If it's not good, then why do you eat it?"

"Because it's GOD!"

(Me: *dreams of chocolate*)

Until next time, (A.K.A. So long, farewell, until we meet again!)

~Killer Zebra

NO! Farah! ... Although your "crying until my eyes pop out and float away" imagery made me LAUGH. In fact, despite all the horrible things happening (i.e. Farah's death), I think that this chapter was one of the best (and funniest) in a long while. Wonderful job! ... But maybe it's just that I like listening to people make fun of Vizierio. Eh. *shrug*

Favorite Line of Chapter: I yanked out my sword (I only had one now, since my other was back in the Prince's possession) and in one smooth motion, I kicked the balcony gate open and walked inside, smiling.

"LUCY, I'M HOME!" I announced loudly in a Ricky Ricardo accent.

(Me: Because I can just PICTURE it. It's so 'Naomi'.)

"...That's a stupid nickname. Can't you do any better?"

"Possibly, but I don't want to."

Me: ... Freckles, anyone? Weird. A few of your "Buttitches" comments are now also making sense. ;)

This chapter was fun, as always, and it had some nice drama thrown in without being TOO dramatic... (This may be a hypocritical comment.) Keep up the laughs! :D

Favorite line of Chapter: "STABITY! NOW!" (Me: Merely because she used the word "stabity.")

Until the next,

~Killer Zebra

Prince ordering people (especially females) around: nothing new.

Awkward moments FTW!

P/N-ness... making me puke almost as much as Naomi is in this chap, but I'll survive, I suppose.

Favorite Line of Chapter: "You just aren't as good as me!" (Me: Summarizing Prince's entire world view.)

Until next time,

~Killer Zebra

Um. I kind of forgot about you for a ludicrous amount of time... But here I am! I got my hair cut yesterday by someone named Jennifer, and I thought, "HEY! I NEVER FINISHED READING KIRI'S STORY!" ... *cough* So yeah. On to the review!

*begins crying* POOKIE! HOW DARE YOU LEAVE IT BEHIND! *glares*

Eh. I have to admit, the whole "poor, poor Naomi's childhood" thing didn't seem very... authentic. Never mind, I'll just put it baldly: it was very cliche. I suppose it helps to add to Naomi's character depth, though, so I'll let it slide this time.

Other than that, though, I managed to enjoy the Prince and Naomi fluff by pretending that it was just friendship and I didn't know what it would turn into, *glare*, and I entirely blame you that when Naomi started talking about the sword my mind immediately went to the gutter. GOSH! You and those dratted Sporks!

Oh, people on ceilings stabbing people! What could this mean? *ponders*

Favorite Line of Chapter: "That's cheating, Naomi!" he shouted.

"And you fell right for it!"

(Me: Because it sounds like me and my siblings... except I'm always the gullible one. *facepalm*)

Until next time,

~Killer Zebra

I KNEW IT! The brain exploded, even if it was Naomi's instead of Jenny's. You know, someone (I believe it was TUP) compared J's love of books to N's ... but reading this, now? NOT. EVEN. CLOSE. Spazz, anyone?

Naomi: "BOKS!"

O.o Okay. On to less psychotic matters, you seem deceptively pro P/F in this chapter. ...little does anyone know that later on you BETRAY them! *glare* ... But hey, everyone is entitled to their own opinion, no matter how wrong yours might be. (Demotivators FTW! Despair*dot*com)

Favorite quote of chapter:

"Here I am!"

"Where are you at?"

"I'm here!"

"Where's here?"

"Here!"

(Me: Because it's exactly like the game! 'Other stuff' scene in magical cavern, anyone?)

See you in the next life. Or not...

~Killer Zebra

Hey, did you know that I had a reviewer PM me the other day and say, "Hey! I just found this really awesome-ful fic called 'Warrior's Angel'! You should read it!" . . . Only he used a lot less punctuation . . .

This Gabby person seems nice (you know, especially considering that she rescued Naomi from King Creeper), but her character hasn't really been developed enough yet for me to form a positive opinion about her.

OPOD: *zoned out*

Hmm . . . chocolate!

OPOD: *perks up*

OPOD, I need you to go get the Muse. I just had an idea.

OPOD: *fishface*

You can't do the fishface, you're a fish! . . . And I'll give you chocolate when you get back.

OPOD: *stops making fishface* *magically vanishes*

Ah, the "Prince's name" dilemma. I would've loved to do that in 'Not What I Had Planned', but like you mentioned, it's already been done twice. Or . . . three times? Did Sanne-Chan pull the name card in 'Gamer Within'? Don't 'member . . .

Naomi has the wheedling skillz DOWN though, eh? XD

Favorite quote of chapter: "CAN WE PLEASE DO THIS AFTER THE SAND CREATURES ARE DEAD!" (Me: Because EVERYTHING comes after the Sand creatures are dead. Otherwise you are.)

Lovely job, Ms. K.

~Killer Zebra

OMIGOSH! This is so intense! Too bad I don't know exactly what's going on! Wait . . . I do. Oh, phew. *wipes brow* ;D

I do not like this 'Mike' person (obviously. If you wanted him to be liked, then you probably wouldn't have portrayed him as an arrogant b-word). For one thing he is melodramatic, and his sense of humor SUCKS *glares at Mr. M*, and to top it all off, he is evil and is trying to do creeper painful Twilight-esque vampire conversion thingies to Naomi!

OPOD: O.o

What are you looking at?

Favorite line of chapter: "Wow, you really are clueless, aren't you?" No shit, Sherlock. (Me: Because clueless makes for plot! It is the one irrevocable fact of author-ism.)

Yours falsely (although you'll probably regret this fact by the time I'm through),

~Killer Zebra