gosh the entire thing. *heart*

woah... that got kinda deep..

This is a lot like the appointments I have with my psychiatrist cause of my adhd and depression, but i still dont tell them everything bc i still feel like theyll tell my mom

Everything about this story is perfect. I can't think of any words to describe how wonderful it is.

Wait... IS he going crazy?

Well-written!

AWESOME

Awww, Steve does care! It's so cute that he took Pony to face his fear!

This is what happens when you don't eat, POny. You end up fainting in the middle of track.

I really like how considerate the coach was. He was yelling at Pony but he was really concerned about him.

Aw, the ending for this chapter was absolutely lovely!

I love how you referenced to the book about how Pony picked up the glass pieces. It's nice that it was Steve who was the one who told Pony, too. See, POny? Steve does care!

So poetic. Just like the actual book. I tried not to cry. It did not work. And the ending perfectly finishes it. I simply cannot contain all of these feels :')

Whoop! Well done!

Wow that was great! "It's time to pick up the glass." Beautiful! I think it's so cute how Steve ends up helping Pony ;)

Bravo! I loved it! Urghnách, foirfe!

Sorry, I've gotta remeber to type in english! I ment to say, extrodanary, perfect!

But I really did love this story, your a wonderful writer!

I see what you did there, you sly dog.

Stay Gold

Layla