Reviews for Distraction
mike alvarez chapter 1 . 3/4/2014
who is this gym person
Milotic1244 chapter 2 . 10/8/2013
You think it was unreasonable she came third. In the anime she came fricking second. Anyway great story hope to see more.
SailorSea chapter 2 . 12/17/2012
Very cute story. You wouldn't happen to know where I can watch pokemon in japanese do you?
ThePandaFangirl chapter 2 . 11/2/2012
Are you a pearlshipper now? My fave shipping. I hate pokeshipping and (no offence) I don't really like advanceshipping. Good story, though.
VideoRate4464 chapter 2 . 7/9/2012
I like this story a lot! You need to continue it.! It's close to anime too! Come on you got to finish! If you don't add more I'm going to end up reading this over and over and over and review over and over! Come on you got to do more of this story !:D this is the best closest pearlshipping story I have read keep going on the story or youll be seeing alot of reviews of me on this story!:D
satohikaforever97 chapter 1 . 7/10/2011
It was great, and I liked when Satoshi coaxed for Hikari.
Daimyo Oowashi chapter 2 . 12/20/2010
great description on Dawn's emotions
TheMasenkoMan chapter 2 . 9/15/2010
Ash finished 1st! lol, I liked this fanfic alot! oh and dont worry i already got a fanfic in the works! :p
SarSar chapter 2 . 8/24/2010
You should make more :D
X-InferNova-X chapter 2 . 5/21/2010
awesome fic!

**SPOILER ALERT**

and considering the fact that Nozomi (Zoey) beat Hikari (Dawn) in the final round of the Sinnoh Grand Festival... [that means Dawn came 2nd in the anime]... this fic is pretty close to the truth! :)

**SPOILER END**

very nice... :P

NONONONO! the ending was adorable! :3

/Anonymodude _/
stokedemmatylover chapter 2 . 4/27/2010
are u going to make the rest of this story or is it done
Lucem Yoru chapter 2 . 4/15/2010
I agree, it is quite adrorable :) nice two-shot. And please make a sequal.
Leemix chapter 2 . 2/16/2010
can i say something...

THAT ROCKED! that was a really deatailed fic, it showed hikaris feelings, but can i suggest something about editing? maybe you could do it rite at the end, they snuggle down together with piplup and pikchu and then a voice goes "ASH WHAT ARE YOU DOING WITH HER" lol random thought, anyway this is a great story, you should be proud of urself
CrystalPrincess.xo chapter 2 . 1/12/2010
OMG, this totally is one of my favorite stories on the whole site. No really, you're story is very well written and I enjoyed reading it. I loved the plot-line and the descriptions you used were just fantastic. Very well done and this will be going straight to my faves.

Great Job!
Aldurnamiyanrandvora chapter 2 . 1/12/2010
If you do make a sequel, please tell us, I can't wait!
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