| Reviews for Distraction |
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mike alvarez chapter 1 . 3/4/2014 who is this gym person |
Milotic1244 chapter 2 . 10/8/2013 You think it was unreasonable she came third. In the anime she came fricking second. Anyway great story hope to see more. |
SailorSea chapter 2 . 12/17/2012 Very cute story. You wouldn't happen to know where I can watch pokemon in japanese do you? |
ThePandaFangirl chapter 2 . 11/2/2012 Are you a pearlshipper now? My fave shipping. I hate pokeshipping and (no offence) I don't really like advanceshipping. Good story, though. |
VideoRate4464 chapter 2 . 7/9/2012 I like this story a lot! You need to continue it.! It's close to anime too! Come on you got to finish! If you don't add more I'm going to end up reading this over and over and over and review over and over! Come on you got to do more of this story !:D this is the best closest pearlshipping story I have read keep going on the story or youll be seeing alot of reviews of me on this story!:D |
satohikaforever97 chapter 1 . 7/10/2011 It was great, and I liked when Satoshi coaxed for Hikari. |
Daimyo Oowashi chapter 2 . 12/20/2010 great description on Dawn's emotions |
TheMasenkoMan chapter 2 . 9/15/2010 Ash finished 1st! lol, I liked this fanfic alot! oh and dont worry i already got a fanfic in the works! :p |
SarSar chapter 2 . 8/24/2010 You should make more :D |
X-InferNova-X chapter 2 . 5/21/2010 awesome fic! **SPOILER ALERT** and considering the fact that Nozomi (Zoey) beat Hikari (Dawn) in the final round of the Sinnoh Grand Festival... [that means Dawn came 2nd in the anime]... this fic is pretty close to the truth! :) **SPOILER END** very nice... :P NONONONO! the ending was adorable! :3 /Anonymodude _/ |
stokedemmatylover chapter 2 . 4/27/2010 are u going to make the rest of this story or is it done |
Lucem Yoru chapter 2 . 4/15/2010 I agree, it is quite adrorable :) nice two-shot. And please make a sequal. |
Leemix chapter 2 . 2/16/2010 can i say something... THAT ROCKED! that was a really deatailed fic, it showed hikaris feelings, but can i suggest something about editing? maybe you could do it rite at the end, they snuggle down together with piplup and pikchu and then a voice goes "ASH WHAT ARE YOU DOING WITH HER" lol random thought, anyway this is a great story, you should be proud of urself |
CrystalPrincess.xo chapter 2 . 1/12/2010 OMG, this totally is one of my favorite stories on the whole site. No really, you're story is very well written and I enjoyed reading it. I loved the plot-line and the descriptions you used were just fantastic. Very well done and this will be going straight to my faves. Great Job! |
Aldurnamiyanrandvora chapter 2 . 1/12/2010 If you do make a sequel, please tell us, I can't wait! |