| Reviews for The Blind Hyuga |
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BlueMapple chapter 18 . 7/23 Once again a fat too late point of view : Hanabi (never !) : I don't understand why you continue to consider her. She is so detestable. Sakura : While it would be interesting and reflect the canon indirectly, I don't like the vibes of a near all female team with only one male... like a harem. Akamaru by himself : lol. Like if it was possible. Kiba with akamaru : Hum... I'm not sure. Possible I suppose. But it would make the team unbalanced. Someone else : Yep, I think it would be the better choice. |
BlueMapple chapter 9 . 7/23 I know at this point it's useless to give my point of view but I really hope the third member won't be Hanabi. It would become hell. |
Sandra chapter 79 . 7/16 Muy pero muy interesante tu historia. Espero poder leer más no tardes mucho! |
LB Cat chapter 79 . 7/15 Interesting story. Thanks |
LB Cat chapter 75 . 7/15 By the way, Love this story. Got. hook on the title. It is not the frog sannin but a toad sannin. So many frog sssince Jiraya character was introduced. Thanks |
Mason Oury chapter 1 . 2/19 Just to make sure, this IS a NaruHina fanfiction, correct? |
sd74 chapter 20 . 2/19/2018 I'm shocked that she did not have the benefit of the doubt of her own power. |
sd74 chapter 17 . 2/18/2018 dear log... |
death390 chapter 3 . 10/27/2017 Interesting premise that shows promise but I can't get passed the grammar problems. |
Jose19 chapter 1 . 8/12/2017 Hinata is not blind what makes you think that way their eyes look like that and they can see better than any Ninja in the village because they can see a person from one kilometer away and sense their chakra signature. |
Guest chapter 78 . 7/17/2017 This story is good |
a reader chapter 78 . 6/18/2017 great story, you've got me really interested. |
Skyrere chapter 25 . 8/3/2016 I like the directions this story is going. I have gotten used to the missing words, and the fast pace. It is kind of funny that Sakura took the place of Hinata in being a complete dork where Naruto is concerned, and since it is your story, you can have her as out of character as you want. I would like to caution you on having too many crazy powerful characters in one story. If you over complicate the character list it can bog the story down significantly, and confuse everyone... :) My example being Hinata's mom suddenly popping in with a crazy powerful ability that either gives her amnesia or is a split personality with crazy strong powers. One of the things I had to do was make notes of character ideas in different note books specially designated for just that so that I didn't derail the story I was already writing. anyhoots... I love the many ideas you have and the way they grow into stories... You remind me a lot of me. :) |
Skyrere chapter 5 . 8/1/2016 so far, I am enjoying this take on the lives of Naruto and friends. :) |
my 2 guys chapter 3 . 6/12/2016 that was good keep the chapters coming |