It's really good! I liked how you included the pensieve!

i heart it.

why did lucius have to include the crucio curse?!

Thank you so much for posting the end summary, provides closure to readers and is much appreciated :) Wonderful work!

I really liked this chapter. Good job.

Thanks so much for giving the plot. You would have written a wonderful story, but the quick version truly is satisfying. Thanks!

Awww I wished you had finished it. However, still a great story!

I waited until this chapter to review, only because I simply couldn't stop reading. It's magnificient, and in all ways truly excellent writing. The storyline is consistent, and perfectly rearranged to fit with the original books. I felt that the HP books didn't indulge enough into Severus's personal emotions, and yet you basically put into words how i thought of Snape. And Draco and Hermione? Well, I couldn't have found a better story. I loved this soooo much! Please keep writing, you're very good at it.

Beautifully written! It's a shame u couldn't finish writing the story many unexpected twists and the end is so different...but in a good way! U gave us two love stories when it said just one, thanks
Ps: HUGE fan of Dramione️️

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The thought of third years snogging makes me cringe.

I like that. Hermione not runnin off with Harry and Ron and not putting up with them so much. I also like that Ginny wasn't simpering after Harry.

Hestia's background was not expected.

This would've been long - about 50 chapters, I expect. It would also have been extremely angst ridden.

How did Lucius come to that realization at the end? I don't understand it.

awwwe

You have a talent, I am URGING for you to write another one, it's such a good story for the "bad side" and I really hope you'll write more. P.S Draco Malfoy is my favourite character.

This story was simply amazing. Only thing that would make it better if there where more Draco and Lucius scenes.