Reviews for Harry and the Magic Factory
typo chapter 10 . 7/24
anything in England - anything in English
Guest chapter 9 . 7/24
Just the idea of Draco/Hermione halfway killed my interest in this story.
error chapter 7 . 7/24
used Avada Kedavra - used The Killing Curse

You are confusing the incantation with the spell name
olisully chapter 23 . 2/21
very good, very good indeed
SolarSolstice chapter 23 . 10/13/2019
Damn. Great fic, wish it wasn't abandoned but that's life.
Fanficaddict78 chapter 11 . 9/13/2019
This is fantastic story..hoping one of these days you have a time to update..have a Great day.
yaoiaiss chapter 23 . 8/4/2019
Great fic , too bad it's abandoned , I loved every chapter well though well written well structured , also good view on the corruption of the ministry , the Substandard level of education that the cannons suggest indirectly , also the proposed solutions both for governance and for the plan for future Integration of magicals withe muggle world the only idea I might have added to such story , is how muggle-borns , are most likely squib-borns , making them mostly pureblood or halfblood ( one might even argue that only when two squibs marry , and in certain conditions ( including non inbreeding ) that a magical child is born , making everyone pureblood in a way though with potentially possible muggle ancestry down the tree )
tessagclaryf chapter 23 . 3/26/2019
Amazing story. No other words needed for the creativity of all the possibilities that is shown in the story. I saw that it was abandoned but it interested me so I read it. It was worth it but I wish for more. I hope when I started that it came close to an end.
Axel Alex chapter 23 . 3/17/2019
j'aimerais tellement une suite :/
ALF chapter 23 . 1/7/2019
I have read your store and have enjoyed it, maybe you will come back and finish it.
Skyeleaf1956 chapter 1 . 12/29/2018
I just stumbled onto your stories. This one, I have truly enjoyed. I wish it would have been longer as there is much potential here. As a fan of Charlie and the chocolate factory, I must admit, this story has been better written and more fun to read. I do hope at some time, you will continue to write stories.
Brit4Shains chapter 23 . 10/30/2018
I'm really sorry that you show this story to be abandoned... so sad... it is one of the more unique and truly wonderful HP storylines on this site.
Netchka chapter 19 . 10/3/2018
WOW! Cool story. More please! More please! I really, really wanna read more please! I can't wait to find out what happens when the next chapters come out.
Wolvie26 chapter 23 . 9/19/2018
love it! it's a shame you abandoned it, but it's your life. I hope nothing happened in your life that took you away from writing as you are really talented. I hope that your muse has only run off on you and will come back one day and you can finish this! i'll be here waiting when you decide to update. other then that I can't wait to see what happens next! Hope you update soon!
Pat chapter 23 . 6/21/2018
Too bad you never continued this. I know it's old, but I just stumbled onto it, and I've had a great time reading it.
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