this was a superb story

I hope the author ignores the sour grapes posts of "guests" such courage to leave scathing reviews anonymously. seriously this writer shows great promise, I have loved everything I have read this far.

Absolutrly atrocious writing. There's quite a lot of criticisms I could ramble on about but honestly there are too many to list. Sorry, I don't think you're cut out to be a writer.

Such a unique story!

This was really truly a beautiful beautiful story. Thank you for dedicating to it and sharing it with us!

Going to have to stop at the first chapter. Your writing flow is very awkward. Especially the dialogue. There is hardly a single instance where you depict the characters' reactions or emotions in between their lines. Paragraphs of nothing but dialogue just leaves too much to the imagination and is also very stiff and awkward. You also use "said" WAY too much; either find other synonyms to use or don't use it at all; it normally isn't necessary.

Hey, your story isn’t bad, but it really bugs me that you changed Hermione hair. In my opinion one of the things that define her is that she doesn’t care what others think and I’m just not getting that feeling off of her straightening her hair. I had straight hair until I hit puberty and when it got curly it was much like Hermione’s. I found it really hard to deal with and constantly felt like I couldn’t be pretty with hair like that. I feel like Hermione straightening her hair could kind of push this stigma on other girls like that and Hermione is such an Idol for the opposite. Other than that I like the story so far tho.

Good story

Such a good story, the last few chapters had me in tears. You are an awesome writer.

SIMPLY LOVELY epilogue! love it!

great story! the plot is unique—kudos! great writing and characterization! great new characters as well!

I'm interested in the story so I'm going to keep reading but I wanted to mention that I found that some parts of the first chapter come across as slut-shaming. For example : . specifically referring to whore as an insult, belle "jumping into bed with the first bo )y who winked at her", the long paragraph about how hermione chose to stay a virgin and belle'd admiration about it. I get that these are probably character choices, just all together in one paragraph came across a bit rough.
Looking forward to the rest of the story

OMG OMG OMG you have the best song choices i have ever seen. THANK YOU!
also. Apologies if that was a little bit out of the blue

I couldn't stop laughing at the house elves rendition of YMCA. That was bloody brilliant! Thank you for sharing!

I loved this take on Dramoine. It was so heart felt and I can't tell you how many times I cried. One thing tho...I feel you should put a trigger warning at the beginning because a lot of what is discussed could bring out some traumatic things for other people. You're writing was tasteful and well done. Thank you for sharing!