That was Crazy. I didn't expect all that.
But I definitely like the ending! The kiss on the cheek was Unexpected but GREAT!

well, it were a nice fic, but.. WHERE'S THE SEX PART?!

Loved this! I've seen so many fics where the grown-up is this perfect parent gifted at treating the child, and the child just totally loves the 'parent' all the time that it was so refreshing to see a 'parent' who messed up and knew it. I loved the elements at play, and enjoyed this piece very thoroughly. Kudos to you!

Omg it took me 3 hours or 2 but I finally finished this story! I was shocked when I found it and loved it! I stayed up till 3am but I don't care it was worth reading!

I wonder what SCAR would think of 4 year old Ed?

Lol..that was a very intresting story...i dont really see the rromace in it but good story no less..lol

Omg this was a great story! When I read the part where Lil' Ed was all like "I'm going to possess you, Fullmetal, blah blah blah" I was like "YOU LITTLE BASTARD! ROY'LL SAVE EDWARD!" anyway, great story.

this is cute!

Nice story

Wow Roy

Awwww thatwassuchacuteending

The bad guys that Ed was chasing were the Homunculi, right?

QQ nothin to say but…wow. Not what I expected. I liked it :)

I normally don't read chapter fics…but by the time I saw that this was a chapter fic I had read the summary. I still considered the fact that MOST chapter fics bore me out of my mind but after a few minutes and rereading the summary several times I decided it would be a crime against my personality if I didn't read this seeing as I love stories where stuff like this happens. Judging from this chapter…I made the right descision. I can tell reading this is gonna be fun and I plan to enjoy every second of it.

very good.