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*sobbing*

It is great! Please tell me there is a sequel!

So good! So saddd! Please please tell me that you have already or at least plan to write a sequel to this! I wanna see him and yugi years later when yugi solves the puzzle and they realize they're father and son and they're happy and yugi remembers his past life and tells yami that he forgives him because he understood why it had to happen and because let's face it, atem would've had some dark thoughts about how he doesn't deserve to be forgiven for killing his own child so to finally be forgiven after millennia...please I need a sequel to this so badly!

Augh! No! My heart! It's breaking! No! Why!? Okay first off, this was beautiful and then it turned sad, and then I wanted more. I shall now go on an adventure and if there is more, or at least a snippet of Atemu waking up in Yugi's mind and realizing who he is in. Anyway, thank you for the emotional heart break and the excitement of reading this! It was amazing.

He killed his own son?! I know it was to save the country...but why? I know that the thief king meant to have revenge...and if Atemu died...it would be Heba who would be next. But I don't understand the last part...did he died too?

*crying* the start of the story was good but the end of it made me cry poor Heba but he and Atemu will be together forever :'( you made a really sad story but it was good *still crying*

OMG! I JUST DIES! LOVE IT!

That beginning was so precious and tender...I loved it. But that ending...as sad as the canon ending for Fatal Frame 2. Just wow...such impressive writing.

-Dies-

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. . . .Dang. Atem is something. I can't tell if he was evil for doing that or kind.

That was amazing. You're very good at writing, it was so well written! I cried at the end, I didn't even see it coming O

Keep writing!

that must suck. no wonder atemu was so damaged as yami. .-

brittney

I'm crying so much. I might do something like that but 1 thing is sure is that if I wasn't killed I would kill myself. I'm slightly overprotective so I would be unable to live with killing my own children.

Aww, that was that cute but that sad as well ;_;

The last scene made me cry, even though I kinda saw something like this comming...

I think you broke me with that last bit. The whole thing was so wonderful and so adorable and so real, and then it all went wrong and... Yeah. If you need me, I'll be staring into the distance and trying not to cry.