Love the title for the chapter.

Reading this story is kinda like the first time I watched Amber Benson's movie, 'Chance'. I thoroughly enjoyed it, but it kinda left me confused with its non-linear approach.

Well done, if a little jumbled...wait, that's just my head's thats a mess.

Anyhow, kudos!

I'm really loving it so far. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Toodles!

I'm loving these multiple updates all at once. Makes me a very happy reader. he! he!

The story is still awsome as always. It's so different from everythng else. And beautifully written. I really like the way you go back and forth between time, it just makes the story all that more intresting.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Toodles!

This is an absolutely great fic, I've been reading it over at BWR and I realized you never update over here at FF. So it can be a bit confusing, I abosolutely adore it and I'd be writing all this over at BWR but it doesn't want me to review for some reason. I can't wait for more, it's so confusing, but once you understand what's going on you can't stop reading. It's intriguing and great. The only thing I'm confused about is Paul, you never really mentioned him other than when April is already dating him. I didn't like Leslie either, because it scared me a bit that Luke could have been with her. But you have to finish! Is Luke leaving Seattle for Lorelai of not? You left off on such a cliffhanger in chapter 41. Update ASAP!

This story is AMAZING! It's seriously near perfection. I'm really lovin it. And this last chapter, with Luke and Lorelai's 'This is it.'; brilliant. I love stories like these, and since there aren't many of them out there, I'm SO glad you're writing this one.

God, I love it.

Update soon!

Toodles!

Hi,

Your story is very different from those i usually read here.

it picked my curiousity from the very first chapter, and after a few, well you got me! your writing is really good, your sense of timing is very original and i think it really brings out the kind of suspens yoou build there. i look forward to read what happened between jess and rory, who's leslie, and hopefully to get some hints leading for L/L re-pairing ...

Fuck, that was depressing.

Good job.

Keep it coming, please.

I love this story and I have been following it on BWR so I am a few chapters ahead of here. Please up date soon!

Good story, (ofcourse I've only read chapter one) I just think you need to improve your summery.

I really love the story. I don't know why you don't have more reviews than you do.

I understand why people would say that your story is confusing. In some ways it is. Having so many jumps in time can drive a person crazy, but I understand where you're going with it. Stories like this are hard for people to get into.

The writikng is actually very good. It's elaborant and consistent. Basically, you're doing everything right to me. I personally can't wait till you post the next chapter. And this story might be like another that I've read.

The story was absoluely amazing but not many people reviewed for it. But, sometime later, I guess people started reading and the response was off the charts.

I really can't wait till the next chapter cause I really love the story. To me, it's brilliant.

Update soon!

Toodles!

I too was a little confused at first but then I got it! I am very intrigued to see exactly where you are going with this story & who exactly Leslie is (and how we can get her out of Luke's life! hah I want my L/L!). It's interesting to see how different things are from the actual show. Great job so far!

It's a little confusing, jumping around in time so much, but it's a good story. Looking forward to hearing the story behind the "April letters". And Leslie? O, the intrigue :0