Hi! I totally fell in love with your story! Would you allow me to translate it in french?

Really excellent story did not to stop reading but sad it came to end it was fantastic

Really good story did not want to stop reading but sad it came to end it was good.

I think Legolas might have been so 'distant' because maybe he wasn't used to being around non-elves. Come on guys his father isn't exactly welcoming to non-elves inside the books. Estel probably was the first non-elf he spoke to! LOL! LOVE THIS STORY! :)

Very nice story! i love love stories especially with a happy ending :D

Your writing was very good can't really say that i found anything wrong with it such as spelling/grammer mistakes but i wasn't really looking, guess i was too into your story to notice if there were any lol. i liked how you didn't make Arwen a bitch, it is hard to find fics like that.

so all in all it was a beautiful romantic story. thank you for sharing it :)

awww such sweetness. *dreamly-sigh* it is destiny! _

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great story really liked it.

That was wonderful! And every word was worth it! Such a lovely story! I loved it! Thank you very much I enjoyed it a lot! :)

this was a great story here.

this was a great story here.

that was so good, too bad it ended

Tis quite a beautiful story you wrote, although I did have some problem with the tenses and use of older English mixed with modern. Good job though.

aww~~ happy ending

i luv happy-endings

for a second there i thought there'll be angst

BUT IT WAS HAPPY! -yay!-

u have an interesting writing style. i was similar to Tokiens (sp?) but different. not as formal. like the first sentence of this chapter:

"The battle over Middle Earth has been fought and the good guys have won."

"The battle over Middle earth has been fought" sounded formal..

".. and the good guys have won"

umm.. not as formal. lol

keep writing! u have awesome ideas

thank you for updating

very nice story and nice ending

Lauren

Very nice but some spelling mistakes.

Please update soon

Lauren