I...like this. . It's interesting. I've seen the concept before, but this piece still makes me want to read it.

Runa and Varie's relationship is cute and nicely played. Like how Rufus is shadowing them (Liam- I like that name) and now that's he entered the picture I can see things changing a bit.

Saw a couple of typos here and there and a few places where a comma was needed, but, eh, a quick scan can easily fix that.

Yep, but, I'm enjoying this. I hope to see a new chapter for it soon. Gotta add this to my Story Alerts! .

It took a long time, but that's okay. You really spend a lot of time putting tiny details into each scene, so it must take a long time to write.

Now for some suggestions, I hope you don't mind. Maybe you should consider putting scene breaks into your fics. The perspective sometimes changes from Runa to another character without warning, or you'll go to another location without a lot of indication. Going from the inn to the pub was a good transition, but later it seems like they are walking in Solde and suddenly they are in the Lost Forest. You don't have to put so many intense details into every boring little part of the story such as leaving Solde, but maybe it would help to end the chapter there, or to break it into another scene. Anyway, that's minor criticism. I only point it out because you seem to focus on a very high quality of the actual writing. There are lots of vocabulary words in this fic!

As for the plot, I like how Rufus is calmly watching after the girls, but I'm mainly eager to see what the big plot point in Dipan will be.

Can't wait to see more of this fic, but take your time!

Oh, hope Rufus will make his official debut in the next chapter.

I have no idea what Alicia forgot, perhaps I'm just slow?

Totally love this, please update as soon as possible!

a man with green eyes huh? could it be Rufus? i hope so...already anticipating your next chapter so dont let us readers wait too long :)

Omg,I cant believe,you have update!Oh I really thank you!

Is so rare to find out a well written fanfic in general,this is cause you have truly the talent to make yours the characters even if you havent create them!I mean Alicia is SO ALICIA in all..the talkings,the manners etc..I remember how much she is insure and naive,how she clasped the hands also in the game...I really love these details,apparently so little but so important to feel the character..

So keep up,you are doing a wonderful work!Im looking to see SOON the next chapter,please please please! ;_; :)

YES! You finally updated after all this time! You have no idea how long I was waiting. Although I'm taking awhile to update my story as well (that's writer's block for ya).

Great chap. I know who was spying on Runa! It's Rufus. Did you hear me? Then I'll say it again! It's RUFUS!

(Sorry about that) Please update really soon. It keeps getting better and better.

Finally

Continue and don't do that again. I'm dying from waiting already.

That's so long...*pout* You need to fastened your updates...

But...

I really like this chapter! It's getting even more interesting! Update!

Reviewer here! Just a thought. Alicias reincarnation is in Corriander, Corriander is a sleepy town and Villnore is more of the busy busy busy.

Keep it up and dont wait so long to update! _

This is mainly a transitional chapter, it's hard to get through scenes like that for me. It makes me more interested to see what will happen next.

YAY! Rufus is makin an appearance! I can't wait to see them meet ... PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

please continue on. It's getting increasingly interesting.

Orika: Ah hahaha! Finally Rufus is making his appearance... I can't wait for your next update...

Vampire Orika: Pipe it down will ya...

Orika: Alright sheesh you don't have to be so cold...

I was out of safe little world

And walked in the wilderness

The wilderness

That we once walked together

Even though my memory cannot remember

My heart will always do

Forever...

Orika

Damnit are you gonna update or not? I love your fic and dying here waiting for you to update! *wail...

Pleaze...pleaze...update soon! *puppy eyes* update soon if not right now...*sob

Just one word

Great

Everything always ends up in one word :UPDATE!

So, update, okay?:)

Oh no! She forgot her lipgloss! XD Can't wait for the next chapter!