Good story so far and interesting story. I hope you get around to finishing it.

Yay, you're alive! Don't be sorry for the time it has taken, be happy that it has lead to something good.

I like how everything's seen through the eyes of a child, because most people tend to forget about how it was to be little. The way you're telling the story and the words you use are excellent - all cookies to you, milady!

I'm always looking forward for more, no matter how long it'll take!

Very interesting story and I do like it so I hope you will update it at some point. The differences and similarities are a plus in this story. Thanks for writing it.

Lovely! Good to see that you're alive ;)

The story is intriguing, I like to see how it grows (like stories do, through stories. Stories are like your babies, right? At least mine are...)

Keep the good work up, and have some chocolate

Yay! an update. Your writing has improved so much Lymbis. The story is still fantastic and getting even better.

Can't wait for more

Update soon

Later

Aw! _ Is that the start of friendship I see sprouting? _~

Steve & Michael Plushies: *disgruntled huffs*

Glad to see an update! I've decided I quite like the queen, and I want to see how the relationship between the two girls, Wraith and human, develops. You've got quite the fic going on here. _

Woah! That's just... amazingly written...

*stare*

(As I said yesterday - I don't have a brain anymore...)

Cool chapter, are the girl and the wraith female going to become friends. Your writing is good, but you could describe the characters appearance better. Like for example, what they look like when the main character meets them would be a good time to introduce appearences. This will make your story easier to picture. I hope you will find this helpful.

L8ter

Hoorah for a new chapter! A rather short one (*tear*) but 'hoorah!' nonetheless! _ I'm very interested in seeing who this young Wraith girl ends up being. Therefore, to satiate my curiosity, you ought to update soon, yes? _~

Short chapter, but an interesting one. I just can't wait (to be king... queen... er... whatever) for the next one.

X3 then again, I'm patient. (My wraith buddies are not:

Deizam: Go girl! Wraith girl, I mean. That's exactly how I'd react if a human got into my room. *shudders*

Arachnidus: *glares* Give it up, will you...?

Deizam: Not my fault that I don't like them.

Arachnidus: Hm. "I blame it all on my unhappy childhood"?

Deizam: XP)

Hurrah for a new chapter! _ I'm not surprised by the fight - I'd be easily set off in such a situation too. But what's going to happen now, I wonder?

Hi! *waves* I'm reading! And I find this story interesting, which is a good thing. Goodie, goodie.

(And I know I've got a lack of words, that's mainly because I just woke up...)

*Hands over coffée and cookies*

*click, click* Wow, this is just the first chapter and there is already lots of potential! It isn't sloppy nor are there too many (I didn't pay attention to them) grammer/spelling mistakes. Also, this is really unique; I don't think this side has ever been done before. I like the nice touch that you have this in first person narration ... very nice. Keep writing!

QOTRS~*~

WAA! You posted it! SQUEE! _ *is very happy*

Steve Plushie: *nodnod*

Michael Plushie: *triumphantly holds up first-ever solo knitting project - a scarf*

He wants you to have the scarf, by the way. _ Please do post more soon. I want more to read, please! Oh, and you don't mind if I stick this in the archive, do you?