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The name made me think I'd read it before, but the summary said otherwise... But now I have! And that was really pretty awesome. Thanks a lot for sharing it with us (and I'm sure I wouldn't be the only one to say that it could make an interesting, longer story. But also, sometimes these things just need to stay as they are.)

Is it possible for me to have DIED and gone to yaoi heaven after reading this?

I had to minimize the tab at one point 'cause my mom walked in XD

I FREAKING LOVE YOU. Holy shiznit. Honestly, this is probably the best SoRi yaoi I've EVER read - actually, probably one of the best yaoi fanfics overall. This is amazing! And your first time writing one, too. (I must say, you did LIGHT YEARS better than I did for my first lemon XD)

You've officially got a spot on my Favorite Authors list. Keep on writing! :D

OMG ohk... there are horrible fanfics. there are ohk fanfics. then there are good fanfics...

But then there are HOLY -replaces curse word with cow- COW THAT WAS AMAZING fanfics. This one falls into the amazing category XD

*Zannah* Aw... that was really sweet!I have a bit of a soft spot for Sora and Riku, and this is great!

You did a splendid job. Both with Soriku and with the lemon It's rare to read about relaistic sex nowadays...

And it had so much fluff

awesomeness

Very nice writing indeed. I loved it sweetness.

Totally faving this!

i really, really liked this. nicely done. well written and not drawn out or rushed, the perfect pace. wasn't crazy about the last line, but beggars can't be choosers.

aw the fluff...i love the fluff. to hell with the others, i love the sweetness. and it wasn't OOC, which actually surprised me, most on this site change the characters to thier own liking. which isn't bad, that's part of the reason they came here. ahh, im babbling. anyway, good story and vocabulary. :)

Ooh, that was the perfect mix of smut and fluff for me. . haha - the ending sentence was my favorite. ]

M...yummy yaoi goodness. This was very well-crafted and I think you got their personalities down great. It was a great idea for a little oneshot and I love that the sea could just wash away all the evidence because the tide was coming in. :squee:

-NS

Aww! So dirty and cute at the same time! I loved it. Riku and Sora are just perfect for each other and you wrote it so well. Good job!

-Gwen-

Aw, this story was perfect. I think you did a good job keeping them in character and the lemon was very citrus-y but not smutty. It's too bad they didn't have a blanket though cause now they're gonna be dealing with sand in difficult areas for at least a week. _ Keep up the good work!

aww, so sweet!