naw, i once read a oneshot with only 90 something words

This...is really, really good.

Nice descriptions. :)

Short, but good.

You really captured good Johnny in this one.

:) Once again, I loved it.

OOH this is really cool!

i liked this. you really know how to show a person's inner feelings and thoughts.

good job ]

In something so short it really

captured what Johnny was feeling

and it had alot of detail which

never hurt no one! So this deserves

a "that was really good!" i liked

it alot!

-lauren

Well, it WAS a little short. But short can be good too! Hmm...Johnny pondering suicide. I could sort of see him doing that. But not like emo all the time or anything.

I liked the other ones better, but it was very well-written for the chosen plotline. Eh, you know I love to read your stuff!

soda-me

wow thats very deep. i like it. oh yeah um... this is my friends account and it is not my friend who is typing this. i am too lazy to log in with my own name cuz i wouild have to log out and than in again and that is very tirsome work. just remember that it is ME!peace.

Very well written!