This story was one of the best fics I've ever read.

The ending was just... oh, it was the cutest, sweetest, lovliest thing ever

10/10 _

aaw that's sweet

sequel please! i wanna no what happens!

lovin this story btw x

i love it i love it i love it!

but you dont need an explanation for that sentence i like it how it is, so i think you should keep it that way

kep writing gravi fics!

For the most part the story was just okay. I think there could have been more emotion and it could have been drawn out longer. But the ending made the entire story worth it. Honestly I thought that it was ingenious.

i really liked that! your NOT a piece of crap,IT WAS GOOD!

keep writing you have talent(maybe you should add on to this story)

*Squeals* I love your work! It's so adorable and so emotional. I'm a hopeless romantic, and this is just the kind of story that makes me want to cry. I can't wait to read more!

I get it... I get it...

GOOD JOB! I love

the falling and catching part...

You're not a piece of crap. If you were, I wouldn't read anything that you wrote, and that's definitely not true, as if you can't tell from the barrage of reviews I'm giving you. In fact, I too, am now a big ball of sap after reading that. It pulled me in so far that I forgot about my cigarette and ashes fell all over my keyboard. And, if that's not a complement, I don't know what is.

UHm...I acidentally put my review for this fic under another one of your fics, "Oh, Baby!" *bashfulness*

that was really cute...loved it

that's one of the sweetest things I've read in a while... great job. But I suggest checking your grammar. Other than that, TWO THUMBS UP!

the ending was realy KAWAII! I liked reading this. Nicely done!

i like the sap.. oO

tastes like maple syrup. :P

lol "put it on his sex"

awesome XD *favs*

this fic was quite cute, I'm impressed really moast wrighters tend to leave a dry taste in my mouth... You know the lack of true insperation and all. Well wrighten. I give you meny props.