| Reviews for The Monster Within |
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   abbyweyr chapter 15 . 9/1/2019 interesting movie to end up with them kissing. |
| abbyweyr chapter 13 . 9/1/2019 Thank you for not making this a touch and immediate lust between them. |
| abbyweyr chapter 12 . 9/1/2019 Nice addition to her room and good trip with Jasper and Emmett. |
| abbyweyr chapter 11 . 9/1/2019 Thank you for Edward's pov. |
| abbyweyr chapter 6 . 9/1/2019 Good for Bella bouncing back. |
| abbyweyr chapter 5 . 9/1/2019 Good start if a bit sad for Bella and especially Charlie. Wonder just how that school offer went over with Charlie. This chapter was a nice way to start over for B&E. |
| jk chapter 5 . 3/28/2016 chapter 5 was total shit... Edwards voice was "gently" Bella "say" Edward get mad and frowning and even though bella found out Edward broke into her house to kill her shes forgiving him the same fucking day... oh you don't hate me? well lets start over then...im bella swan...incredibly desparate and clingy! |
| jk chapter 4 . 3/28/2016 I...I...I...was beautiful... LOL no bella your not beautiful...your a fucking annoying bitch and lets talk about you holding the hand of the man that killed you...the same fucking day you find out it was him! like that would EVER HAPPEN. |
| jk chapter 2 . 3/28/2016 shes not even gonna beat Edwards ass |
| jk chapter 1 . 3/28/2016 this is the kind of girl you want bella to be? you would have us believe that a 17 year old girl...would run up to her room and cry because a guy she doesn't know was glaring at her? weak fucking pussy |
| jk chapter 16 . 5/24/2015 I really don't like tht Edward is always laughing at her...and she just puts up with it..sure she acts like a child and crosses her arms and stalks away but she doesn't actually deal with it..like hey you hurt my feelings when you laugh at me..stop it or ill rip your fucking head off |
| jk chapter 12 . 5/24/2015 family is my motivation they've done so much for me...killed me...gave me a room... that's it but bellas a easy pathetic whore soooo I guess that's enough! |
| jk chapter 11 . 5/24/2015 omg..Edward feels the need to protect bella? really? the same bella he already killed? that bella? what a douchbag he says hes never been presented with such a challenge...oh really? not even the challenge of oh I don't know...not killing people for their blood? how could she think I hated her?...um you killed her he says the thought of anyone hurting her causes rage..LOL um you killed her im pretty sure that counts as hurting her/HAHAHAHHA god your stories a fucking joke |
| jk chapter 10 . 5/24/2015 OMG shes soooo annoying...I HATE BELLAwell this bella she says well we don't hate each other anymore...when did they hate each other? you pulled the same shit last chapter saying Edward was always sad but we didn't see that side of him...its like bellas a huge freaking liar cause we cant believe anything she says way to make the readers hate your main character |
| jk chapter 9 . 5/24/2015 Edward is always sad and doesn't smile much...yaa so she says but all us readers have seen is him smiling and shit acting all like its ok to just kill people. and as far as bella "always" crying and freakingout...really? the readers don't see that either,,,,she hasn't freaked out once...though she should! she should tear Edward the hell apart...at lease LEAST take a huge chunk out of his neck this is written poorly |
