“I can’t believe that I forgot to review this!” Yellow complained and Cornelia snorted.

“I can’t believe Shocklance has left us hanging like that,” she said with a hint of annoyance.

“It’s not like Yellow is much better,” Taranee pointed out, gesturing to the long list of fics that sat on Yellow 14s profile. “Life gets in the way.”

“It’s a cute little chapter, “ Yellow said. “And a great cliffhanger ending.”

“I still want more,” Cornelia grumbled and Yellow shrugged his shoulders.

“That’s the sign of a good story,” he said, before being interrupted by Hay Lin squealing happily.

“That’s so cute what they did with the bouquet!” she said, a smile on her face.

“It’s a good backstory for Celia as well. It’s a nice contrast with the previous chapter,” Taranee added.

Very good, keep updating when you’re able to. Please?

I was greatly inspired by this story! So I took the opportunity to create my own W.I.T.C.H fanfiction. It's still going through some writing, but so far, it's gaining some weight in the doc manager. If you'd like to check it out, you're free to do so. /WITCHTheLostOne

I may just copy this story and update it. Don't know if that's allowed or not, but I'm doing it. This story is way too good to sit and rot.

Thanks for the Christmas update, enjoyed reading this chapter and liked how cute the wedding part was. Was surprised how their were no Frogs in Will bridesmaids bouquets or even her own bouquets. I also loving how we are getting to see more of Nella true self and love the snaky side she is showing again as she is starting to heal it seems as well. Also going to Agree as that scene worked better as recount then full flashback with talking with Becki at the wedding. As that would have played out better as a flashback then if that was scene him and Celia. Where ends with apologize for falling to see the things did not see then.

Omg i would have died if I got to meet and perform with SNSD in the flesh! I was geeking out for Amy lol

"You know Yellow, you really need to catch up with your reading here," Hay Lin said and Yellow sighed.

"What about you lot? You just vanished!" he replied and Irma chuckled.

"I'm getting married remember? To a beautiful young lady who really knows how to-"

"And before you make this review M-rated, shall we continue?" Yellow suggested dryly and Irma shrugged.

"I loved the way that Nella and Marna met. They were so cute! And the way that Becky helped...that's amazing!" Hay Lin said with a squeal. "You can see why she's the keeper of the Heart of this generation."

"I'm just glad we never had to see see that for us. It was bad enough when we thought that Elyon had died," Cornelia said with slightly downcast eyes and Irma reached over and cuddled her.

"Hey, hey, you're not allowed to be sad leading up to our wedding. Elyon's fine and you're about to be married to the most awesome girl in Heatherfield," Irma told Cornelia. Cornelia raised an eyebrow.

"I don't think I'm allowed to marry myself," she replied and Irma rolled her eyes.

"Please, I KNOW you weren't saying that last night," she said and Cornelia chuckled.

"Perhaps you'd like me to prove that I'm better?" she asked, a glint in her eyes as she gently pulled Irma away from the screen and towards the door. Yellow sighed.

"Well I suppose they have a LOT of unexpressed chemistry to use up," he said as the two girls left the room. Now maybe we can focus on the story."

"What can I say? Irma's been in love with Cornelia since they first met," Hay Lin said with a shrug. "But I have to go as well. There's some food details that need sorting out in a bit."

"So it's just me. Thanks for disappearing AGAIN guys," Yellow muttered to himself in amusement as Hay Lin left. He looked at the story once more. Although I'm pretty sure Shocklance means bear, not bare. Still, I LOVE seeing those two interact and the way that their teacher surprised them like that at the end."

A really good chapter. Keep updating.

My thoughts on Chapter 27 are as follows. First I am really happy with the chapter came out and loving things leading to the final battle. The second is the development and emotional growth you showed with Becki, Nella and Merna. I really did like what you show much stronger and more at peace with her past now. As she used those darker part her past to help find that opening to Neela for after she shutdown father in grief and loss that was hitting her about 2nd person that was most closest with is now dead as well. Next Is how I liked is how you showed how much the loss of her father and now Merna has affected her and how nicely you showed close Merna and Nella were. This second loss has now clearly broken her now that shock and angry had now worn off and the only left was the cold feeling of loss and regret of things they would never get to do together ever again. So after Becki helped Nella open up again and finally be grieve properly for those that she lost then. What was thinking that afterwards Nella and Becky going be having more of big sister/motherly thing now. As it kinda looks to heading in that direction maybe?

So once again now really can wait for the next chapter now.

You know it's funny that Hay-Lin made a statement that there's nothing wrong with being a lesbian and asked if Irma was right. it's almost as if...The secret lifestyle of Irma Lair wasn't revealed.

So I voted in your Poll and But about this chapter I Think Kisarc might decide to cut his losses before the final battle as this turning to be more then he bargained for it seems as he does not seems like to type to do suicide missions as this seems turning to be one then right?

2nd thing Liked about this chapter nicely your progressing the story along to the end game it seems.

Also hope the new laptop is working out well for you as well.

Dealing with identity fraud sounds difficult to say the least. Hope it gets dealt with soon.

A most enjoyable chapter and I especially love what you're doing with Kisrac. While not as dark as it could have been, it is indeed darker as expected. Keep updating

Awesome story/chapter. I liked how they handled themselves on the shoran home world. I can't wait to see what happens next.

This is sweet chapter. I thought so when I first read it, and I think so now.

Wow this was worth the wait for such a nice chapter. As much liked this still a few comments to make on it. I think the pacing of them moving to a new place and how Becky might have felt about that change could been shown more maybe? But other then that love this chapter and again worth waiting to read this as well.

The second thing I love about this foreshadowing again that Kisarc and his Shoran. How Kisarc is Warrior and person of Honor loyal to him troops and Logrim is and that might still bite him in the ass at the end and lead to his downfall maybe.

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I love this chapter so much! I can't believe that Will's mom found out about the guardians and how Samantha came to life! Can't wait for your next update!

I can't tell you enough how happy I was when I saw that this updated. It really is one of my favorite stories. That being side I find the ending of this chapter a little rushed. Will and Irma's engagement being announced as well as the talk between Becky, Lisa, Amy, and Samantha. I feel like you could have gone into it a bit more. But theses are just my thoughts on the matter and I am truly happy that this story is moving forward again. I can't wait for the next chapter.