What no kushina?

The movie mission there happens after the chunin exams.

I'm not going to complain about the spelling errors because you story is still readable. My only issues are with you calling storage scrolls summoning scrolls.

Good

spelling and grammar 100

At First I thought you just rushed the ending because you can think anything else I was upset but after reading the final page and you're ending statement I'm more satisfied with the ending of this story than I could think of and I apologize for being upset before finishing the story. it truly is a good story

great story to be honest, grammar and spelling needs works but otherwise great story
the end is a little too dark with everyone dying but not bad

well that went dark as shit at the end

if shino and hinata got together in the future im gonna assume hana died before that, im also gonna assume sakura stayed with lee cause her fetish never came to light other wise it seems like your just giving Naruto girls for the sake of girls especaly since you said sakura wouldn't be in the harem also gonna assume hana is out of harem cause of the shino stuff.

he has the combined knowledge of the kyubi and his 25 year old self and their chakra knows the hirashin and his ultimate resengan hes op

that was pure crack

i never understood why they paired Naruto with the Hinata is beyond me i rather him be paired with somebody who hasn't stalked him or been mean to him, i mean somebody from string country or demon country or even cloud or the mist or even suna oh well whatever

This had an interesting premise but I don't think I can keep reading it :/

Kazama clan?

Arashi? What even? Also, why not just put Ino and Naruto on a team?