I love the concept, geting to imagine the characters reaction in this fictional scenario of the very real and horrible american dub censorship fiasco.
also gotta luv that u worked Brad in to the story... I bet he's the cutest guy in school

Great story. It portrays the relationship between the two perfectly. I also love the interludes.

Loved your story. Very powerful, and so full of tangible emotion. Thank you for sharing.

I was tearing up at certain points when you wrote about how there was nothing wrong with their love. And the subtle part about Brad holding the other guy's hand was really sweet. I also love the Interludes. Everything was so well-written and beautiful. This is a true masterpiece. Thank you for writing this!

Oh my god that was great, the way Michiru got back at him. Bet that created more of a buzz for her than anything ;)

The way you described Michiru defending Haruka's and her relationship was amazing.

Beautiful story :)

Overall, an absolutely excellent rendition of a well thought-out problem. I most especially enjoyed the strength you expressed in Michiru; it's a common mistake to depict her as passive and even weak but you correctly illustrated her great intellect. Bravo!

This is like the 4th time i read this fic, and I enjoy as much a the1st, maybe even more.
Its like you know Michiru, like forever.

Thank you very much for shared it with us.

this is one moving piece. i cannot imagine where michiru has been out of character in this. I imagine this is probably the way she would have handled such a situation. very beautifully written. im a haruka michiru fan and so far this has been one of the nicest fan fics ive read about them. keep writing more!

THIS WAS SO GOOD I'M SO PUMPED FROM WATCHING MICHIRU DEFEAT THAT FAT OLD MAN WOOSH YOU GO GURL

I loved it!

Brava, beautiful and incisive! I am glad that Reynolds got his comeuppance. ;)

As a devout Haruka/Michiru fan, I am in total agreement with your interpretation of their relationship and Michirus character. Michiru IS silk-wrapped steel, and I have always believed that she is the emotional anchor within their relationship (and I am not even a Michiru-fan).

Thank you very much.

I really enjoyed this story. It was extremely well written and I loved the plot. Playing on the American dub's "kissing cousins" theme was great. :)

Thank you so much for authoring this strong, elegant piece. I spent this entire day lost in anger and frustration over the distasteful homophobia I have encountered recently, and your encouraging voice through Michiru was truly a blessing to me.

Daughter of Mars, this story was more than wonderful in any aspect considered! U made me dumbfounded, speechless and under the spell!

Bravo!