| Reviews for A Dance With Fate |
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Guest chapter 22 . 9/16/2019 thanks for writing such a wonderful fic. i enjoyed reading it so much, and let me tell you even though i finished this i feel like i have got some kind of weight on my chest and i dont care what others say but i've always loved stories that can bring out emotions in me and am glad to say that this is one of them. Thank You once again. |
grimmich chapter 2 . 4/26/2018 if he's 18 then why does he look 16? |
Guest chapter 22 . 4/26/2018 I loved that story but I was sooooooo sad when they thought he was dead and that they never knew who he truly was made me so sad your story was beautifully written. |
Guest chapter 22 . 12/27/2016 This is good although you could have added more humor towards the end. |
Bryn chapter 4 . 12/22/2016 "He never stopef believing in them" Um... did u miss the part in the 2nd book? Or the 4th? |
Guest chapter 22 . 8/31/2016 This is such an amazing story :):):):) |
rionant chapter 22 . 6/30/2016 I love this book! I know its kinda late to be saying it but it was so good that I just couldn't help but say so! |
ImpsDream chapter 22 . 7/22/2014 This was brilliant! I really enjoyed it. It wasn't cliched or poorly written which is fantastic and you didn't give Harry all these powers or extra bits of personality. I'm also glad that you didn't drag it on for an unfortunate amount of time. There are only two things I can fault and that's the fact that Remus never found out (I was hoping at the end maybe in the present/future he would) and that your story isn't marked 'Complete'. I very nearly didn't read it because of that and it would have been awful to miss this. Thank you for writing this. |
Salt and Limes chapter 22 . 4/4/2013 This story is fantastic! You write Remus's perspective beautifully and add such subtle horror that it haunts readers as they progress and builds an ache in their hearts. It did for me anyway. Harry was also written gorgeously and his reactions and hints at something more to him that Remus picked up on were extremely well done. I look forward to re-reading this story many times and to reading more of your writing in the meantime. |
brynchilla chapter 1 . 1/30/2013 Hm, very interesting. I have to wonder how Dumbeldore knew. Did Harry tell him in the future, & thus Dumbeldore somehow knew? But that doesn't make sense. Did Dumbeldore go back in time as well? Was Dumbeldore the one who gave them the ritual/spell in the first place, thus he would know if they activated it because he was the one who gave it to them? & the Dark Lord Avarite... that's interesting. Is this an Au world then? Since wouldn't Voldemort be around? Or did he change his name to Voldemort after something? I'm looking forward to reading more. |
sketched-daydreams chapter 16 . 12/28/2012 this is an amazing story and i absolutely love it! |
Kat chapter 14 . 5/17/2012 This was posted on my 10th birthday! (Random info.) |
xPhoenix0Returnx chapter 22 . 2/19/2012 Wow. Hold on, I need to find my brain. Ah, well, perhaps I'll find it later... Anyways, golly. -deep breath- This was a...journey. At first, I couldn't decide if I'd rather have the Marauders find out about Harry's true identity but... I think it worked out fantastically. I love how you wrote this, with the snippets of the future in the beginning of every chapter. And how you made Harry the main character while being a complete mystery. And how you characterized him! :D |
ironhair chapter 13 . 12/8/2011 respectfully respectively |
ironhair chapter 1 . 12/8/2011 wonder how this will turn out. Seems worth a read. |