Yup yup. Absolutely fell in love with the writing in this. The story was really cute, as well, and it was an interesting AU to boot! I also rather love the alluded inclusion of Yuuko - more implicated than referenced, but that was all it took to make this feel complete. ;A;

You're a great author ! This Dou-Wata fanfic is the best fic I've ever read. There's only one mistake in the fic. But, whatever, you're doing an amazing fanfic though.

this was cute

I can't tell I much I enjoyed reading your story! it was so funny and well written but most of all Watanuki and Doumeki were so on characters! :3 wondeful job!

awwwwww. this was super cute! 3 what a great AU!

wow this was such an adorable story. You are truly talented. One day you should write another story with these two _.

i cant stop grinning XD

I wish there was more -pout-

well, this was fabulous anyway!

i have to admit that watanuki creeped me out quite a bit at the beginning lol

and did they ever get to eat lunch? XD

and what is this important matter that himawari had to attend to? hmmm...

*Drool...* I don't know how cool it is to review something written so long ago, but I just have to tell you THIS IS TOTALLY AWESOME!

Actually I kind of figured that I would like it after "Although the TRUE warning (considering this is ME writing) should be of the hints of heterosexual feelings at the beginning." Win before the story even begins. Amazing job!

So cute! I love it! Very delicate, and so like them

Bwahaha. Watanuki gets down on the second night. I went to adultfanfiction to read this. Excellent work. I wonder a bit at the quickness of it, the sudden not-in-love to in-love, because I can't imagine Watanuki having sex with anybody who gave him their bed for the night. *grins*

Well, it was wonderful, of course, and I'd love to write more, but my roommate's asleep and I don't want to wake her up with a clacking keyboard, so I'll just thank you for such a wonderful read and will gratefully bow out. *does just that*

-Kayura

Wah! *faints* OMG, this was fantastic! I'm just about to ship off to the next chapter, but before I do I have a few things:

1) I take it you meant in the introduction that the unrequited love was Watanuki/Himawari, and not the DOumeki/Himawari you said? Because Doumeki says point-blank that he doesn't like Himawari, and... yeah.

2) How do you shake your own shoulder? Do you mean like roll it? Or something?

3) I can't imagine Doumeki ever saying "whatever," even when listing possible things to crack one's head open on.

But these are so tiny! So insignificant and miniscule compared to the all-consuming fact that this is fantastic! Funny, with the characters COMPLETELY in-character, in sync - and funny as hell, just like in the manga!

And the plot is perfect (though shouldn't the bodyguard be with the celebrity?), and the entire mess just perfectly established, with a wonderful introduction that grabs our attention and pulls us in. And I love the random mention of Yuuko there, almost as if it was random! (Maybe it was, but it was great!)

Okay, normally I don't go on and on like this, but I've really loved this, and I don't know how much I'll be saying later, and the only reason I can make such a long review is because I am so thrilled to have found this and I went to your profile page and saw you didn't have any more xxxHolic stories, so maybe if I write a really long, wonderful review, another beautiful plot bunny will chomp on your butt and get you writing this kind of epicness again! *hopeshopeshopes*

Okay, and now I'm gonna shut up, because I REALLY wanna see what happens next. So thanks so much for writing this, and your ability is incredible, and I love your talent (AWESOME talent), so thanks and you're definitely faved!

-Kayura

Yup... Mmhmm... That was a good one. ] I liked it a lot. You should write more to it. Add on a bit. Maybe a sequel. (If you don't already have one.) That's how good it was. It was spectacular. Made me happy. :D

oh this is the best, i couldn't stop reading. it was funny, it was cute, it was sexy and over all the best fic i have read. i loved it D

The boys are so in character in this story. They should have worn a condom, but otherwise it was a very well-written chapter.