Omg! This is so good, I cried so much:)
Your writing is very good, and I think you could make it in the writing world, if you want to.

Awesome story and great plot. It seems very worthy of a sequal but thats just me talking but either way it was a great read. Thanks. ]

nice work

wow, speechless by your writing love it termendously :) keep up

Maybe you should put femslash in the summary, because I got something I was looking for, and ehh... The story line was good, but I didn't like the femslash.

I just want to thank you for this chapter. Several years ago my Aunt and Uncle adopted a little boy who was sexually and phisically abused and I'm extremely close to him, so this chapter hit home. Thank you again. I cant wait to read the rest of the chapters.

Great ending, a happy one, I can't wait to see what lies ahead for Mack.

Amazing chapter! I can't wait to read the epilogue.

I cannot wait for the sequel- I love Mack's character and I am very interested with what you are going to do with it.

GREAT ENDING. I LOVED IT. Still love Mack. Can't wait to see what you do with the sequel. Mack needs someone to help her.

I look forward to what comes next.

Brilliant! I loved it all, thank you.

very nice. Thank you for including it and I can't wait for Mack's story. Will we learn what happened undercover?

YAY! I love the way you put my idea together. Great Job. Is the sequel gonna be about Mack and Alex? I think that would be good. They have their own little thing about her being in the police academy while trying to raise him. Just a thought.

I just read the entire thing. and all i can say i wow.

you're amazing.

That was a fantastic end to a fantastic fanfic!