Reviews for The Earning
rini chapter 6 . 9/26/2015
please more again.i loved this story
ELENIOFME chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
hey great story so far i was wondering if you wewre going to be finishing in the future?
Lemonysh chapter 5 . 2/27/2009
so.. i'm reading this for the second time so i thought this time around i'm going to give a proper review (instead of my last, pls pls update review)

I liked the fact that the story focuses on Wolfram's relationship with Yuuri, though i do miss the usual interventions from other characters (I do not miss Gunther!).

"intelligent to the point of ridiculousness" That has to be in my top 5 best Great Sage descriptions ever! very nicely said.

I like Gisela and her friendship with Wolfram... well sort of friendship, i think it still has a sort of formal shade to it...

I like your writing style in general, and the quotes are really interesting (made me think :P )

overall great fic! update soon! (i can't help it.. i really want an update :P sorry)
Lemonysh chapter 6 . 2/10/2009
PLS tell me you'll continue this! pls!
DemonUntilDeath chapter 6 . 11/27/2008
I really like this story and hope you update again soon!
kingleby chapter 6 . 9/24/2008
great story! i love how your exploring Wolfram's character and making Yuuri realise more about him _
lazy fat kitsune chapter 6 . 8/22/2008
Interesting, I'm wondering where this would lead to, hmm? It's nice to see Yuuri making the effort for once and Wolfram being the 'hard to get'. You write beautifully, so I'm hoping for more?
Ishka chapter 6 . 6/2/2008
Great fic. I especially loved how you went from Burning in the first chapter to the line of how Wolfram felt like ashes inside. Looking forward to more!
rain chapter 6 . 5/24/2008
Please continue. It's an interesting story and doesn't jump to less innocent stuff before you can blink an eyelid.
DaystarsMom chapter 6 . 5/19/2008
I've been following this for a while, meaning to review, but just hadn't gotten to it - sorry.

I'm really enjoying this fic, especially this most recent chapter. I hope there will be more once finals are over (hint, hint). You have a smooth style, with very few grammar problems to trip over, and the story flows well.

But what I really like best is the way you handle the characters. I was particularly taken with Yuuri and Greta plotting to do good for Wolfram - it was *so* like Yuuri to take something that serious (and that he *meant* to be that serious about) and find a way to make it almost a game.

I'm also very much enjoying the slow-building repair and reconciliation in this relationship. It feels very realistic and satisfying, and I'm really looking forward to the rest of the journey.
The Meta chapter 6 . 4/17/2008
I'm so loving this story so far. Update when you can please!
esther chapter 6 . 4/6/2008
YES! AWESOME STORY! AWESOME CHAPTER!

i LOVED the description of them walking in the rain...it was so good...i could totally feel the drip drip of the rain, and noticing the little insignificant things like the droplets on the umbrella...like wow...

can't wait for the next chapter...
ladyaymie chapter 6 . 2/17/2008
*FANGIRL SQUEAL* They're back together again! Or at least, they've partially made up. But either way, I'm so happy! And Gisela and Greta's interventions were perfectly timed! :D
rein hitomi chapter 6 . 2/15/2008
Indeed, it was a long chapter. But I had fun reading it. You really thought about how Wolfram would react if he was mad with Yuuri, and I especially liked Greta! She was a genius!- And Gisela might really had turned into The Sergeant. Haha.

Anxious about the next chapter. This was a nice Valentine's gift.-
Eveliina92 chapter 6 . 2/15/2008
I loved it! Expecally the rainy-day-walk-with-Wolfie-scene
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