Reviews for Snack Time Gone Wrong
sonder this chapter 1 . 1/21/2017
I wonder what were those lines of text that had inspired you into this. Ah, I wished this was a drabble series at the least, the subtle VxL vibes are just calling for it. This was very slice-of-life and even though we, the readers, don't know about the whole story that have brought them to this point, you had allowed small tidbits to hint at the times we did not get to witness to - the strudels, the fishbowl, the obvious remaining tension between Lady and Vergil. I especially enjoyed Vergil's stoic humor here, haah. And his distraction tactic, what an unexpectedly sly move there. Obviously, he has mellowed out much in this universe here and yet, from how you have characterized him, I could actually well, strangely, see it. I hope you continue to write for the DmC fandom but since muses come and go, I guess I'll just have to lurk around your other stories.
gliver chapter 1 . 1/18/2015
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Fontenette chapter 1 . 4/25/2014
Credit to you, dear author.

You have probably already heard this many times in past reviews, but I feel the need to stress it in my own. The way you wrote all the characters - Dante, Lady, and especially Vergil, are very true to their video game counterparts. That deserves praise, seeing as that is quite a feat (considering how other authors are not able to do this as well as you do). I love how the subtleties in Vergil's actions are what carried the whole story in the end, seamlessly weaving into the wonderful, not-too-sweet but satisfying plot. This made for a very enjoyable read and I will definitely be adding this to my favorites.

Again, good job. Keep writing; you're very good. Cheers, dear, and have a nice day. :)
Fate Deteriorator chapter 1 . 4/5/2013
That was sweet. I like it. It says a lot, but no sunshine and rainbows.
xxWARxx chapter 1 . 12/21/2011
Hey!

Poor fishies! This was great! I LOVED it! :D

~SoulLove
Ivory Tears chapter 1 . 8/29/2011
Goodness, I loved this so, so much! :D
It was written wonderfully and everyone stayed in character; a definite addition to my favorites. :)
Mistress 0f Dragons chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
Lol, Dante used Yamato to cut pizza. That is funny. Great job. Keep up the good work.
Semjaza chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
This was an extremely enjoyable read. I love Lady; she's probably my favourite character. And good job on writing Vergil, he seemed very in character, if a bit mellower than he was in DMC3 (he didn't kill the fish. Or Lady. Or Dante, lol.) and Dante making fish lips at the bowl was hilarious. Awesome! :D
Pixiepoxy chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
What a great piece of fanfiction! _

The characters are perfectly believable, even though they're out of their usual dark setting. Love the interactions between Vergil and Lady...I always thought these two would look hot together, they have a lot in common. I liked how you showed that Vergil does indeed have a sense of humour, as opposed to "emotionless" Vergil from other fics. Love it! Wish you wrote a second chapter or sequel...
Ravenlaughter chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
Wish you'd written another chapter or two for this story...I like the dynamic of the whole Vergil/Lady pairing

Well written, very much in character. :)
Wot Wot Wark chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
So I admit that I wasn't expecting much based on the title, but this turned out to be a very cute "just another day at Devil May Cry" fic. I liked it a lot. :D Loved the descriptions, especially Vergil as he was eating at first, haha. Loved Lady here, too. Nice job!
azab chapter 1 . 5/16/2009
loved it
CallMehTehOdd1 chapter 1 . 3/10/2009
NAME TEH FISHY FRANKLE! OhEmGee! Brilliant work, babe! Laughed, cried, laughed again... You've written this fantastically, I loved every word! I am envious of not thinking of this first! Gah! THANK YOU FOR WRITING IT! BRILLIANT! TehOdd1 xoxox
zenbon zakura chapter 1 . 2/27/2009
who knows dante might just be listening into their conversation lol then covers it up with the fish lip act lol dante the #1 surprising goof ball lol
Rai Laurel chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
I love this story not just because it had Vergil in it but because it was so well written. I thought it was funny that Dante had used Yamato to slice up a pizza. Its about time, too, that someone else would take on Vergil besides Dante and acutually win.

That poor goldfish lol!
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