"...dating IT for a while..."
"...terrifying IT can be..."

-these two lines are over the top!-hehehehe!

AWESOME! LOVE IT, this is Epic. May I please translate it into French? I hope you don't mind. Congrats again for this greatness, I was laughing out loud all along. Very well written
*Hermi-ko***

In Hirumas words: fucking awesome. That was ilarious, and you got these 2 down so well, I could totally see that happening. xD

Holy sh- /laughs like a lunatic

This is just.. -wipes stray tear- When Mamori gets all mother hen mode, she really goes all out. And Hiruma should know. How could he not when he was the first to experience all of it? XD

This is one of those cute times when I enjoy seeing this side of their cute and weird relationships. Hahaha.. XD

Not a fan of HiruMamo, at all. Even so, I risked it and read this. And, well, I can say Imma satisfied content girl. Cuz, well, it was fucking awesome. Hiruma always is, and you portrayed him rather well. And, for the record, I've always thought he isnt that violent. Cuz, I mean, he never actually shots people for real. At most, grazes them, with those safe-bullets-things -forgot the name Dx-. And, uhm, I just loved it, didnt even minded the HiruMamo, since he was kind of using her -here-, it was even welcomed 8D XDD Thanks for writing it!

Hehe, behold the power of shaming someone to death. Really, because there are easier ways of getting his Colosseum than guns and ammo. :D

XD Oh, Mamori. As much as I twitch every time you throw yourself in front of Sena in an attempt to 'protect' him...

You kicked ass in this. XD

love it Ya Ha! its so mamo

Creatively executed. Kudos!

*is dead*

it's... it's ... *sobs* it's so perfect!

Mamori would do exactly that thing and Hiruma would use it that way, totally XD

Oh that is beautiful! XD

this is the BEST fucking story i have EVER fucking read.

faved!

*gasping for air after laughing for almost an hour* Somehow, I would not be surpised if this story ever became animated or be seen in the manga. The relationship between Hiruma and Mamori is one of the many reasons I love Eyeshield 21. After reading this fanfic, I have fallen even more in love with this pairing. Everything that you had written is pure gold. The characters are true to themselves and to each other. The humor is wonderfully well-written and well placed. Also, your title and summary catches the reader's eye. *snorts* Hiruma as a pacifist, indeed. All in all, this fanfic is an absolute favorite for me. Please continue to write such lovelies for the Eyeshield fandom in the near future.

i love hiruma. not much of a hiruma/mamori fan. but i like the story anyway.

I hope he gets his Colosseum:) Loved it.