Update pls.

This story has such an interesting plot that still somewhat follows the main essence of the actual show\manga. I wish that this story would continue. But if other things came up that prevents you, this is okay. Thank for putting this wonderful beginning up!

Love this!

Great story and wonderful detail! I was glad to find a lengthy story that could hold my interest. Thank you!

Please please please continue this if you can!

Please update! I love this story ;) Continue!

you made Rukia a bitch. She is only supposed to beat Ichigo up to knock sense into him when he is scared of something or gives up. so far I don't like it much if Rukia is going to keep acting this way.

I really like how this story is coming along! Please keep it up~ :D

cool story :)

lol u are so hilarious

i luv ur storiess

itll be a shame if you stop; keep writing!

hey

this is great!

i love the way you wrote your characters!

(although i may not be the best critique since i've never really completely watched bleach)

its really compelling

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Jerkess, I'm so sorry for this extremely late review! I was busy with my studying... but I'll make it up with this review! By the way, I was surprised when you mentioned my name down there in your fic. Thank you *bows*!

Well, the party scene is not really unpleasant. Hisagi and his sleeping manners *lol*. Do not judge a book by its cover I'll say. And that's a subtle way of introducing Gin into the picture. Usually, in a long fiction (like Harry Potter), authors will drop hints of a new character in one chapter and then reveal that character in like 10 chapters later *laughs*. We have Rowling writing the name Sirius Black in Book 1 and then have him in action in Book 3. But you introduced Gin's name and character in this chapter. It's a clever decision actually; readers will remember that Gin has actually been mentioned and could read deeper into the plot without asking themselves "Did she really introduce Gin before... he didn't just jump out suddenly..."

I particularly enjoyed Rukia/Byakuya's conversation. Both are OC and ouch, an injured Byakuya. The last part where he said he wanted to go see Rukia dance was PERFECT! And is that conversation warning us about battles at Wilford? I wonder what the PEs will do there...

This chapter is engrossing. I find myself reading and reading and then I saw my name *laughs*

Thanks again. Hope to see a new chapter soon!

Sorry it took me so long to get back to this. I'm glad to see this up and thanks for the shout out. ::blush::

I liked this chapter, and though it's long, like I didn't know where else to end this. Haha. ) If you want me to look at the next chapter, I will try and help. First day of school is Tues. EEp!

GD

Yay! Chapter is back up! Aw even though Ichigo was not physically in this chapter, he was emotionally! This was a very descriptive and well done one at that! O I bet I know who the mystery taicho is! _ And Kaien tried to murder Byakun? x What a shocker! Please update soon!

Eep! Wonderful chap! Lol. I love Byakuya. He's such a caring brother, though he tries his hardest to hide it. Sweet...

And that part about Kaien...it's just sad...I have read him being killed in so many different ways in the AU fics that I have read, and I can't help but be sad at every single one of them. :'( He's such a great guy, and I love him. XD

I'll be looking forward to some IchiRuki interaction in the next chap, ne? Update soon! Take care now! :D