Loved the story! Really great writing, the world needs more Shino/OC stories :)

such an interesting and exciting story!

I loved reading this. Couple scenes and the mystic forces was interesting. Thanks for the story and I’ll definitely check out your other works!

Do they know her first name is Paige or are they gonna keep calling her by her first and last name?

i have absolutely loved this! Shino finally get some love!

Amazing.

Really good, Paige's powers were cool and well explained. Only two things to 'complain' about, ShikaTemaShikaIno! and in my opinion Paige got kidnapped too easily (Shino is supposed to be strong and he just lets them take her away). Apart from that (which can be called observations instead of complaints) i really enjoyed the story.

I love this story. I think it's my third or fourth time reading it. I'll be reading your other stories too. I bet they're just as awesome as this one.

I'm confused in this chapter Neji calls Tenten his wife but in another story related to this one you say that Tenten is married to Drake who belongs to another author...

I have just finished reading this Fanfiction and simply
wanted to say :
I absolutely adored it! (since it was truly original)

That is all, really.

AHHH I really like this story and even though its over 7-8 years old I just wanted to say that (I wasnt going to leave a comment because of that reason) BUT anyways, I hope you keep writing in general because your writing is amazing D

This was very entertaining. The first time I've read this type of oc before. I like that the power that she brought with her could be explained. Great job!

I was not sure I would enjoy this. But I did immensely. I have severe fear of spiders which some how translated into Great dislike of bugs, though shino is an interesting character I have been unwilling to explore him for that reason. I also enjoyed all the symbolism presented through the spirits. You posses great knowledge of them. Not many possess that anymore.
Overall a very good read and an interesting insight to a reclusive and secretive clan.

I love this. Not many know about spirit guides.. I was approached by mine when I was four. He is the coyote, but wolf also guides me as well... I'm Mescalero Apache. I've never heard these legends. I'm guessing you are of a different tribe. Which one?
Also the birthmark thing made me curious. I have a birthmark of a broken heart on my arm.. What that about?

I love the sex jokes in this story! xD