I really like your story and I'm really starting to hate Dumbledore because like poor Heron is just trying to understand the human world and I feel that he is going to manipulate him to participate in the war. That makes me worry for him, cause Heron deserves better. I hope to hear more from you.

I fell in love with this story and checked to see when I could expect an update... 2 years... my heart is broken...

This story is amazing! I must say that the plot and character portrayal are astoundingly good. The storyline alone is complex and intriguing, and the way you have written each character ads tremendously to that allure. Fantastic job! I am thrilled to have found this. I can't wait for more. Especially when Heron finally meets Draco and Blaise :)

Now this is great, a really unique idea and well written, really looking forward to your next update hope it's sometime soon

Oooooooh, this looks really interesting! It's brilliantly written and really unique! I can't wait to see what happens next! Heron is so cool and I am looking forward to how he adjustes. Contrary to what other's said, I don't find heron stupid (as in not intellegent). It's obvious his intelligence would be measured by different scales than human ones, since he wasn't brought up by humans. To make him "human" intellegent would be unrealistic. I'm quite curious about the magical core reader thing, I can understand why he was disgruntled with red hahaha, I was too. I can't wait till they see how he does magic and actually comprehend he's doing it consciously and it's not accidental magic, that would be awsum! Really, really looking forward to the next chapter and the rest of the story!:)

If Lily took Harry away as soon as James told her to run, Why would Harry still have the scar from Voldemort?

Why did Voldemort disappear if he wasn't destroyed when he tried to kill Harry?

OMG the painting! I see what you did there! I love the connections between Heron and Sirius.

awesome

Love it! Please update soon!

When I first started reading this, I was hopeful that Remus and Sirius would have an equal place in Heron's affections. It's clear now though that it's going to be very Sirius-heavy and Remus is going to be made to look increasingly out-of-touch and distant to highlight their relationship. So, yeah. Sad :(

that was great I cant wait for whatever happens next:)

Thanks for another chapter.

I'm glad to see you updated not too long ago. I hope you continue as this is very interesting.

I don't know what this story was like before the rewrite, but as of now it is wonderful.