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Yay! A Merry Chrissymas fic! :3

Aww~! So sweet~~~! I love this story! You've done a very good job with it and now I miss the old beyblade...Anyway, your story is one of the best I ever read. Good job!

Wow...that was profound!

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Very nice!

Hiya!

I know, I know, it took me forEVER to finally respond and review your story . I'm sorry, my excuse is... Ok fine, I don't really have an excuse; I got three new video games and I've been so distracted with them that I've barley even looked at the internet over the past two weeks (Terrible, I know XD).

ANYWAYS! Now! Getting down to your stories. I read all three KaiHil fics that you've published and I enjoyed them all . I'm reviewing this one in particular because it left the greatest impression on me.

First, I guess I should say that I thought Kai was a little out of character. Although, that's not really fair, since writing Kai in love is gonna be out of character in any form XD And I have to say, this is the most in-character I've seen Kai in any romance fic. So that was very well done!

I love the detail you use in the fic, you described the snowball fight very nicely and I could see all the characters interacting.

Tyson, Kai and Hilary also had well defined characters (like, it's not as though you had just come up with the lines and stuff them to the character, rather, you thought about the character of the person and designed the lines to fit them)... er... I'm not sure how to explain it exactly, but I hope that makes sense .''

The only reason I didn't mention Ray, Max and Daichi there is because they didn't have a very big part in this story so I couldn't really pin down the subtle differences between them as such.

Oh and you really like that scene from V-Force where Kai shoves Kenny and Hilary into the cliff and protects them, don't you? I think I read at least three different way of describing that scene in your fanfics . Actually, to tell you the truth, of all V-force, I think that was one of the only scenes I actually liked p It's a very good reference to show the relationship between Kai and Hilary.

I think what I liked most about this particular fic is that it reflected an opinion that I myself had. I don't like it when teams break up and go their own ways (it ALWAYS happens in anime! They 'go their own ways' or whatever... Why can't they just stick together!). I'm glad they all got back together as a team .

You have a very good way of creating a 'story world' even in a one-shot, it's like there was a full event that occurred and got resolved (it wasn't 'empty'... you know?).

I admit that some of it felt like it was just restating events from the anime, but telling them from Hilary's POV was interesting.

Actually, I liked reading from Hilary's POV rather than Kai's POV (I think you did another story from his POV)... I'm not sure why... It just...flowed better? Was it easier to write from Hilary's POV?

Hm... I think that's all I had to say. Awesome stories, I had fun reading them! It's difficult to find well-detailed romance fics that don't completely throw Kai OOC I'm really glad you asked me to read this!

'Til next time!

Adio!

Sholay

aw totemo kawai!

one of da best fics iv ever read

i lik it

Its probably not the right time to be reading this since its the middle of summer but oh well:P Another great story! Loved it!

I felt like I was going to cry. *cries*

good fic!

Really cute story: )I love it!

Aw That was so cute! Great Job!

i liked it

loved kai/hil

great job

aww, soo kawaii! and soo good! the perfect cute and sappy kaihil that everyone loves to read ) lol. beautiful! great job!

~Moonlight Serenity

aka Jess