By all means, go on.

This is really good!

Hrmm, this could use some improvement. For instance, I've noticed a lot of typos, very abrupt tense changes, and some sentences could be revised for better reader comprehension in general. I recommend more editing before posting in future and, if you can find one, a beta reader.

As for the story idea, I like it. Eliv Thade is always fun, in my opinion, and Samrin is a sweetie. I also love seeing stories that try connecting various "famous" Neopet characters. In fact, is that some foreshadowing that Albert might be Samrin's father? ;) Even if he isn't, it would amuse me if he showed up at some point. That's entirely up to you of course. I would be thrilled if Gilly showed up, as you've suggested she might.

However, I think it's silly to stop writing based on how many reviews you get (I realize I am essentially adding the third review requested for further chapters, but that isn't my point.) I think you should write the story because you want to write it. (You should only write things you hate if you're getting paid for it or if you lost a bet.) ;)

I love this! It's so very good. My only problem is that the "The temptation was strong and it worked, he

dropped the frightened petpet and immediately I grabbed it rushing to the paddock once more."

Is separated into two different paragraphs. Other then that, I like it. Please continue.

This is pretty good, but there are many, many errors in it as far as grammar goes. You use a lot of description, which is great! It really paints a picture in your mind, but it's hard to read when punctuation and sentance structure is incorrect. You're well on your way, though! Good job, and keep trying, okay?

And I'm very interrested in seeing what will happen next. There aren't enough stories about Eliv, and he's my favorite character. :( So, please, do continue!