So you practically copied Pain Hunger and Betrayal and called it your own. nice job moron

Bro, I didn't know that Sarutobi Sasuke was the third hokage.

Bitch

Atrocious. Badly written shit.

"quite ashamed of his actions"
The fuck? They deserved it. By Hokage's own law they should be executed, nevermind what they're willing to do to a child.
And that's setting aside that Nanashi is a shinobi who lived through war, there's so much blood on his hands he isn't capable of feeling shame for wanting to kill people that deserve it like they do.

Sooooo is Naruto just gonna let Kakashi do that? Go to the memorial and drag his ass to the mission or something. Leave without him. Don't take his shit like a little bitch.

I agree Anko, he is a bad shinobi :D
And he really should have expected that bad lay comment. It all but wrote itself o.o

The three formerfuture senseis easily read him, Anko has been reading him, Genma is apparently good at it, he "can't help but widen his eyes" and all thatIt's sounding like Naruto is a godawful Shinobi. Not even the most basic of emotional control, even at the facial muscle level. Sounds so far like he doesn't get tired, he can take a hit, and he hits hard. That's his entire repertoire as a Shinobi, he has negative self control.
A few things like seeing his younger self/Iruka the first time, the shock of that moment, those are excusable. But his every day actions? Everyone reads him just as easily as when he was a 12-year-old mentally disabled academy student.
A 25-year-old war vet really should be more capable than that.

Eh, for someone as insanely experienced with clones as Nanashi is it shouldn't be possible for her to take his clones down with "terrifying ease." That speaks to the lack of skill on Nanashi's part, not Anko's skill.
I see you're likely trying to set her up as at the least a near equal to Nanashi, but the way you did it so far I can't see happening.

"Too powerful" is pretty relative. He barely scraped a win over Orochi by committing suicide afterall. Just make his enemies S rank threats and your balance should be fine. Canon just broke that by making those like Kiba and Neji his opponents, and then also made Orochi and Pein etc. his enemies. He survived against his peers on some of his own skill, and mostly the Kyubi, and then against the bigger guys by pure Kyubi at that point. (Plot armor in disguise)
So just make him kick most everyone's ass, but Orochi, maybe Tobi, Pein, so on are on his level.

Sarutobi Sasuke? o.O Is dat a typo?

No

If you're looking for a good way to hide Naruto (Or Kakashi, or any ANBU...anyone at all with a mask) eating behind their masks, the best way I've found is for them to cast an illusionary (The Henge is meant to be a transformation Jutsu, so the mask would physically still be in the way) Henge over themselves which puts the illusion of the mask still being raised. Then they can eat in peace. Of course, someone with a Byakugan or Sharingan could see through it, but whatever.

Just a thought, so he doesn't have to rush his meals.

Uhm...Sarutobi Hiruzen you mean? Sarutobi Sasuke was Hiruzen's father.

It's a damn shame it was dropped, so promising it was...