| Reviews for One more chance |
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   wovenbywords6213 chapter 1 . 7/27/2018 A great story; thank you for writing this! c: |
| Naheem chapter 1 . 11/18/2015 That was awesome good work, you have real good talent. |
| Disabled-Account-12345 chapter 1 . 7/30/2010 That was soooo sad, soooo cute and soooo going on my favs! . Nice job! |
| Rana chapter 1 . 5/25/2009 I really like this, it's great. Just be a bit more careful; parts of some sentences were in past-tense and parts of them weren't, and it was a little confusing. |
| Charise246 chapter 1 . 8/9/2008 -whspers- Oh my god T_T it's so deep... I love it so much *sob I so what've kicked Momo's ass if she didn't apologize |
| silver-moon-sapphire-sky chapter 1 . 12/30/2007 Very sweet story. You did a good job with Hinamori and Hitsugaya- they were believably in character. Excellent Job. |
| rottenapples801 chapter 1 . 10/29/2007 -French accent- Zat waz a mazterpiece!... ... |
| alex zouzoulas chapter 1 . 10/3/2007 Beautiful it was so beautiful i had never read somthing filled with so much emtion so much pain so much sorrow where do you get these ideas but you could have made the ending longer just saying but yah! the story was good |
| Rawr chapter 1 . 9/17/2007 Adorable story. Write more please. |
| Lady Meiku Noire chapter 1 . 9/9/2007 Sniff... Wah... So beautiful! This could actually happen in the bleach series if I didn't know any better! |
| Shadow Fox777 chapter 1 . 6/28/2007 I thought it was good. Very good. |
| shikaxinoX3 chapter 1 . 6/28/2007 That was beautiful...it made me cry...GOD I LOVE YOU! . your stories are AWESOME! X3 |
| kahel16 chapter 1 . 5/30/2007 Oh my God, that was sweet! But then you do have to work on some parts You have some grammatical errors and the SLAP! at one part kinds ruined the mood _ But other than that, it's great! |
| I play wid fir3 chapter 1 . 5/20/2007 Hei! Fliffyness! Whoot! I love it! |
| BrokenVoodooChild chapter 1 . 5/14/2007 So sad... I liked it! You should write more of these! |
