this is very neat

Parents...
Psh!

This was nice.

I've been looking everywhere for some nice friendship between Zuko and Toph. This was awesome. You handled this situation perfectly, and I love the brevity.

A moment that captured them beautifully. Awesome!

This was very well done. You really captured the characters in the dialogue, I enjoyed how there was a definate fifference in the way they spoke. Good job on this.

KrisEleven~

Wow. This a brilliant little piece. Sharp, well-written, and quite poignant, really.

Nicely done.

I really like this oneshot. Both were in character and a flustered Zuko is always a good read :o)

I think you did especially well with how he tried to explain his situation with his father. When dealing with a abnormal family situation, it is hard to articulate one's emotions.

That was so good for a one shot. I love it. I'm really starting to like stories where Toph and Zuko interact.

I liked it, it was...credible.

Nice work.

GO TOKO!

GO ZOPH!

Nice little scene here...very real. Not much to it, but then, there doesn't need to be in this case, I don't think.

Very Nice Job.

The Pterodactyl

Very nice. A little short for my liking, but it was too the point, and i liked it _ Nice work!

Uh, faved.

The walking, talking archetype that runs Zuko's plotline could only be summed up so well by one person. Since Toph is a molder of all things pithy.

This makes me happier than anything has a right to.

liked the oneshot. You showed both characters pretty well. I hope you write more toko.