This was really really good! I know you wrote it a long time ago, but this is my first time seeing it, so I hope your still writing, cus this was really good. :)

I seriously love this story. I'm usually not a huge fan of ones that actually have the dialogue depict the accents, and use words like "woik," and "goil," but I really like this one. :) one teeny tiny thing-and I know you've already finished this story but maybe a tip for the future if you haven't already figured it out-but always make sure the word after a bit of dialogue is lowercased. I'll give some examples: "I really like this story." she said. Is ok. "I really like this story." She said. Is not ok. When the word after a bit of dialogue is capitalized, it's meant to start a new sentence.
Exhibit B: "I love this story." She adjusted herself so she could be more comfortable before continuing to read. Is correct. It starts a new sentence, y'know? Incorrect version: "I love this story." she adjusted herself so she could be more comfortable before continuing to read.
Usually after a bit of dialogue the words used depict how the character said the phrase, ie: "I love this story!" exclaimed Lily excitedly. Read the "exclaimed Lily excitedly" part alone. That's what it would sound like if you wrote it like so: "I love this story!" Exclaimed Lily excitedly. See what I mean? Of course words like "I" are ok, since I is always capitalized. Words like she, he, or they, however-would not be capitalized. Sorry it was a long review hope it helped. :)

Found this story and I am glad I did! I love seeing a girl who can stand up to the king! Well done

I like it

SQUEAL! I LOVELOVELOVE THIS STORY!

aw no its the end! i loved it, really i did! if you havent already made a sequel you should!

I like this.

I love how she's not a Damsel In Distress, and how she tries to take care of her own problems.

-Bekah

o my gosh thats so cute! falling asleep in a boat? and him with his arm around her! was that on poipose?

I have to say this story is... AWESOME. I hope u update soon.

This is by far the best Spot/OC fic I have ever read! :D Sequel please? haha

Wow. That was a really good story! I kinda expected Dastardly MarySue to take over. But, it was done very well, and while she was still really cool and superior, you portrayed her in a way that made her seem human. Bravo.

i loved it

LOL. I'd be laughing so hard if it wasn't 2:30 am. I really love Chaos as Spot's girlfriend because of hr fiery temper and ignorance which would seem like they would never be together, yet could. The twists and turns were great, always keeping me on the edge of my seat. I've laughed at all of Chaos and Spot's fights. I've become so obsessed with Newsies recently, I think I might just dress as one for Halloween... and sell papes. Can't wait to read your other stories!

Seren

HEY! i really loved that story,and it was fantastic!Also i wanted to know what story #1 about the girl who is scared of other people called so i can read it,also #2 they both sound really good!

thanx 4 writing this story!

I enjoyed reading this story. I appreciate the ending being mid-action, because while there could be more, it works just knowing that it isn't the end of the line for the characters (even though the story is over). kudos!