*SQUEAL* This is so fucking sweet and adorable!

LOVE THIS~

Amazing 3

Awwww utterly sweet, it made me happy after my long day of summer school...

-Momentai-

this story was cute and gave me a bit teary eyes but i love it :)

Hm, this is coming months later, but this is when I read it.

It was, to put it simple, cute. The fact that Leon was hiding himself behind a name, and using that acceptance of the older, unused name to strenghten the relationship was something I haven't really seen before. Good job.

Keep up the good work!

-Spider

Lol, I loved it! :] that was so.. *squee* Cute, I guess? I'm not quite sure, but I knwo I really liked your story! :]

i love sappy shit.

this is right up my alley. :D

hugs and cookies for doing such a good job!

That was a very cute story, very in character and beautifully written. Great job!

I truely believe that you caught the spirit of the boys!

so cute and fluffy...i love it! keep up the good work

{aw, the poor little orphan boy T.T}

~momo

aww that was cute _ i like the ending there child hoods were kinda simular i guess

anyway nicly written

This was a great little piece. I really liked it. It was believable-angst/fluff, which is hard to do with these two, sometimes. You did it well. The ending sentences, the orphanage boy and the boy hated by the adults... I loved the paralelism there. Good job.

very good i think you accomplished your goal with the name squal. ive always felt that name was a little too intimate for anyone but cloud to use anyway. Squal means storm which describes leon almost too perfectly.

Aaw, so cute fic! I liked it very much. Sappy fics are usually good, so was this.

But I think this fic was little bit too short. :D

I liked it a lot. I especially liked Cloud's comment on the lonely little boy in the orphangae getting along with the lonely little boy hated by all the townspeople. Made me smile. My only critique is that you use more commas than you need to and it disrupts the flow of your writing. But that is easy to do and easily mended. Anyways, it was great and I'm glad you thought it was worth finishing.