this is brilliantly in character and equal parts hilarious and exciting!

I know that it's been a decade since you last updated, but I can't help hoping that someday you will continue this story. Good stories about Sesshomaru and InuYasha's bond are quite rare, and yours is really satisfying to read. You wrote in detail how the relationship between two brothers developed, which is absolutely fantastic. Thank you for writing this story!

This is an amazing series. You've done an exquisite job at keeping them in character. Inuyasha is the ruffian we all know, but you didn't make him an idiot at all. Sesshomaru is also stoic and no-nonsense yet very poised and has an honorable side. I love how Inuyasha was "cataloguing" Sesshomaru's stripes on his body. The pacing is really nice, and I love how they're slowly forging trust among themselves little by little with gestures. I sincerely hope you may one day find the time and interest to update this again, as it has been almost a decade and this still has much potential. Cheers!

You are an amazing writer. I love this story about the brothers and am devastated that it's so short and unfinished. But I cherish what there is.

Utterly brilliant. I'm in complete adoration of this story and a fan of how you portray Sesshomaru & Inuyasha. They are my favorite OTP of all time. Also, you are beyond talented, dear writer and even though, you haven't updated in a long time, it's still a fan-favorite of mine all these years. You have a powerful grasp on the cohesiveness of syntax throughout the story. It's fluid and eloquent. I applaud you, my dear. Pleasepleasepleaseplease update and hope your alive and doing well. Wish you the best and good luck. Happy New Year's! Hope your having a great year so far! Xo :) Ciao

Very interesting story. Oh I really hop one day you update. Its not often I come across a story about Inuyasha and Sesshomaru having a relationship thats not yaoi. Plz update someday plz. Will be following.

Omg this story is so goooood. I was sad at the beginning aftet finding out how much time had passed but seeing a possible relationship btwn the brothers was such a great idea...and pretty accurate of their characters. Damn. I was hoping this would be continued but i see it wasnt updated for a long time :(

Plz update soon

Plz continue its really good!

This is good I hope you update soon :)

This story seems so good .

PLZ UPDATE! You've done really good with this, so I'll hope you continue this eventually in the very near future.

Splendorous.

I chastised myself for starting this fic at first, since it appeared to be unfinished, but even without the entirety of your story, I'm glad you shared.

You laid out a believable plot and haven't rushed the characters. They don't act OOC, in fact they are portrayed as well as I could ever hope for.

I found myself wondering all day how this tale would have progressed beyond this. I can hope that one day it'll be continued, I have seen fics left un updated for a decade come back, so I can wait :D

Thankyou for the breath of fresh air amongst the less than palatable fanfics.

I had to admit, this is plagued whit politics, antics, traditions and a lot of stuff a little tedious... but the way you are implementing it, and the way you used it to make Sesshoumaru and InuYasha close is very interesting.

I like this fic so far. Is slow enough to undestand the concepts you are using and fast enough to not be boring.

I hope you revive this fic with an update any time soon.

Oh, I have been enjoying this so. Your writing is exquisite, to say the least. And I have read quite a few "InuYasha comes to the palace" fics, but I love that you made it more political than just, you know, "Fluffy-sama turns over a new leaf!" I do hope you pick this story up again :)