| Reviews for Baby got back |
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   All I Gave You Was Goodbye chapter 8 . 6/23/2008 hahah that was adorable! wonderful story! great job [: |
| IheartORANGE chapter 8 . 2/17/2008 very cool! I love the way Oliver did not falter when he heard about the babies! |
| Reianna907 chapter 8 . 1/26/2008 story! |
| Oneirofobia chapter 4 . 9/15/2007 I like it. It isn't wonderful, but a fanfic ain't supposed to be, it takes away the spirit. Bad spelling.. One thing for example was that you spelled it "vergin" instead of "virgin", and I'm from scandinavia so I'm not very good at the language myself :P And then you say these 16-year olds are at "Seaview Middleschool"? That doesn't sound right.. ;) |
| xXkIsSkIsSxX chapter 8 . 7/26/2007 OMG, this story is def going into my fave stories list! Good Job! |
| Da Who chapter 3 . 7/18/2007 Good story, BAD spelling. Not REALLY bad or anything, just enough to really annoy you. Nice plot. |
| fan-fic-lover1111 chapter 8 . 7/11/2007 hey, macs rule! |
| fan-fic-lover1111 chapter 7 . 7/11/2007 i just realized, you have her as 16 in middle school |
| fan-fic-lover1111 chapter 2 . 7/10/2007 im loving the story plot, but u need to show the dialouge instead of saying "they talked about it..." other than that great job |
| iluvdisneychannel chapter 8 . 7/8/2007 Aw! How cute! I thought this story was great! .:.~*iluvdisneychannel*~.:. |
| Freebird87 chapter 3 . 7/4/2007 Against abortions and adoption? Never heard of anyone against adoption. |
| emay-reetay chapter 8 . 7/2/2007 so cool u should totally make a sequal! |
| L0V3 4 wRiting xo chapter 8 . 7/1/2007 aw! loved the ending! |
| candycrazy chapter 8 . 6/30/2007 omg,why did you end it? *cries* it was amazing. i love the last chapter. BEST LOLIVER FAN FIC I'VE EVER READ! ...actually it's the only one i've read,haha. |
| HexGirl07 chapter 7 . 6/28/2007 Okay good story. I don't know how old you are but I really don't think you are the correct age for writing Mature stories. I am not saying people under 17 or 18 or whatever shouldn't be exposed to this stuff or telling you what to do, but this story didn't really have mature content, it could have been under Teen. Also, I don't think you are mature enough to handle actual mature content if you are calling your story and sex "perverted". _ Lilly smiled at Miley and pulled her into a hug and said "Thanks Miley...I really missed you too, and I know what i did was stupid but i really can't change what happened, and I dont want to...I love Oliver and I know this sounds kind of perverted but I dont regret what we did. _ Spell check is your friend. Vergin Virgin Unisin Unison There were a lot of grammar errors and I couldn't even read chapter 7 because it's in one big paragraph. All together it was a cute story but just work on spelling, grammar, and your content, it will make it much more enjoyable for your readers. |
