That was nice, although a little irritating because the other name for Minato. xD '
I liked it but so sad. ._.

its a lovely story... me like it! keep it up!

That is very sad. I am now depressed... *sobs*

I love the way you developed the relationship in this. It was very well done, and pretty realistic too. The entire story was very, very touching.

I like the way this fic was narrated. Different from the general narrations.

it was good but some parts i didn't get. Was he slepping with that guy.

Wonderful. Sad, very bittersweet. You did a great job. Fav. of the stoies that I have read of this pair.

M... wow, pretty. *two thumbs up* I like... loved the bittersweet tone throughout. It was beautiful, but we knew it had to end. Hope to see more from you!

- Arashi-chan

Very, very good. Amongst the best fics I've read for this pairing. Well-constructed, gripping and very moving. Hope you write more about them!