kino doesn't like having someone traveling with her

this story is cute! very nice! _

Quite intresting for a short one-shot. A bit like a short poem, or a dance. I'd just like to point out that you don't need to explain the things you do to the characters in parenthesis, like when you showed your reasons to believe that Kino was a good dancer. You created the story, so you say what goes or not. There is no need for any explaining. Aside this little thing, I enjoyed very much this short, lyrical little story.