Oh man this really hit me hard! I adore it, its amazing hun :]

I find most SasuNaru stories unbearable - probably because Sasuke is just so angsty. (GaaLee is my OTP actually.)

But this was really, really great.

AH

sad bro.

love it

sadly.

:(

If I close my eyes real tight I can pretend like this wasn't a NaruSasu story. Regardless of my opinion on the pairing, this was beautifully written and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Perhaps for my own amusement, I'll read through again and replace a couple of names in my head... and pray that it doesn't detract from your wonderful gift of storytelling. Good job.

A sweet heart braking done!

Sweet in its own way; it's too bad Naruto never showed it to Sasuke - or did he?

Not much for NarutoxSasuke things, but your style and skill deserve a review, at the very least.

Keep it up, k?

Ah shucks that was good. I really love Naruto, too bad he loves Sasuke, hee. It does seem like something Naruto would say, nice and simple yet honest. I loved it!

Wow, somehow that's incredibly sad... Like, really really sad. Good fic though... *cries*

sequel...

i DEMAND it!

Ah, yes. The simplest says the most. Love the notebook thing here.

I Love it !It's short and sweet! Please write another!

wow,erm, don't mind this little comment. it's not gonna beas cool as the one you got before. still, i wanna say something.

i love Naruto that likes to read! *feels better*

Naruto thinks those girls silly. you have no idea (or maybe you do!) how cute that makes him for using such a simply word.

sequel? *puppy dog eyes*

in my opinion it could remain an unrequited(i think that's what you intended)oneshot or it could have a sequel. sometimes the author just wants things left alone, i understand that completely! thus i will not beg. beggin's for Kiba!

i am so lame. *sweatdrop*

just that last sentence, my heart goes out to the Naruto you created. he isn't OOC, that's not what i'm saying. authors sort of create the characters, even if they remain hardcore IC. but that is once again my opinion.

thanks for writing such a lovely fic. (weird to say i know)

hope to see you never stop writing! oh and i hope you always enjoy writing!

It was very nice.

The way you worded things was very pretty. I like the way that you write.

The last line left quite the impact.

Sakura and Ino were rather IC on my opinion (which really isn't much, but, well, that's what I think). I'm not sure about Naruto. He's also quite the complicated character... and not a lot is really known about him.

"I want to have Sasuke's babies." That sure made me laugh.