You are so lame. Akito is so annoying. I mean after all the pain he/she caused everyone and it still got a happy ending it makes me sick. Akito should have died if not then should at least be thrown into the cat's chamber. So this way Akito can get a taste of his own medicine it would be good. Because then where's the karma in this? So what the story basically said was, look I can be an $$hole if I want to treat everyone terribly like they are trash and at the end, I will still get a happy ending. that's a load of BS

not taking out on you but the first part is for you. But I just don't think Furuba has any justice it just doesn't.

Actually I love Akito he is my favorite character

i love akito so much!...does that make me a lesbain? lmao

O_O . . . um... okay then. uh, nice poem, hn... uh...

Please regard me kindly!

Argh. I thought I'd already reviewed this, but apparently something screwed up and I didn't. ANYWAY, so this was amazing. You have really improved as a poet, I remember reading a poem by you a while ago that was quite good in concept, but not so much in literary quality-this was extremely well-written, and you get the concept across even better. I love this poem, and I'm favoriting it. You have such a good grasp of Akito!

My only problem is the use of the word 'oops'. It seems a little too casual for Akito, and it kind of threw me off...because it reminds me of Britney Spears and now I have horrible images in my head. XD; But that's just a tiny thing. Great job.

*sniffles* SAD! It's so... bitter.

...strangely, the alert for this story popped up in my inbox. I have no idea why, since ff net is still glitching. It must like you. xD

When I read the summary, I was like... pfft! It must be a plot. xD. And I was right!