If only something like this happened in the movie...

I enjoyed this short story. I did notice, though, a few run-on sentences. One in your first paragraph seemed intentional. But the later dialogue could use either commas or periods. It's just a suggestion for an easier read.

Speaking of dialogue, the conversation between the two friends sounded genuine. It was also funny. I don't blame the movie for what happened to Harry; they were just being faithful to the comics. It was good that you ended it with them still being BFFs turned superhero partners. It made it more endearing.

Thanks for the great read!

I saw a few typos in here, but the storyline was great. Too bad it was so short, I was really liking this. :) I always wanted Harry to have survived. Anyway, awesome job!

I have so got to show this to my mom... she's writing a novel-length AU sequel to Spider-Man 2, and is very interested in all things Spider-Man. I bet she'd enjoy this story.

Oh, I LOVE this! Here are three reasons why:

1) Harry survived

2) Everyone was SO in character

and

3) The Bugle was dead on!

Congrats!

Heck yes, this is just what I needed. The movie nearly depressed me at the end. But all the fighting scenes and especially Peter and Harrys (fight against or with each other) were just too awesome.

Nicely written!

AW he's alive! and they're buddies again! I don't know if this was intended to be a short little thing but please write more what if senarios like this!

Yay for Harry being alive!